Rainy Day Fun
A Rispetto for the Potlatch Challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
And don't the children love to jump in puddles, that has never changed even with today's hi-tech kids. Lovely Rispetto June, well told about cheery fun on a rainy day
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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And don't the children love to jump in puddles, that has never changed even with today's hi-tech kids. Lovely Rispetto June, well told about cheery fun on a rainy day
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent all the way around. Good rhyming and presentation. Word choices are creative and work well to describe your them. Happy in its image. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is excellent all the way around. Good rhyming and presentation. Word choices are creative and work well to describe your them. Happy in its image. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this piece,
Comment from Bill Schott
This rispetto, Rainy Day Fun, has the proper formatting and finds the good in a down pour. That good, of course, is seen in younger eyes.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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This rispetto, Rainy Day Fun, has the proper formatting and finds the good in a down pour. That good, of course, is seen in younger eyes.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aren't giggle and wiggle just the best words for a children's poem?! ;) Love this one, June, as it raises the spirits of readers of any age!! :) :) Thanx for sharing your challenge, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Aren't giggle and wiggle just the best words for a children's poem?! ;) Love this one, June, as it raises the spirits of readers of any age!! :) :) Thanx for sharing your challenge, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Thanks for dropping by to share your insights. Always nice to hear from you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rispetto about having fun on a rainy day is always a time to enjoy with the right gear not to get too wet and it goes with lots of giggles and splashes.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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A very well-written Rispetto about having fun on a rainy day is always a time to enjoy with the right gear not to get too wet and it goes with lots of giggles and splashes.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece.
Comment from royowen
You remind me of my childhood when I'd jump in puddles, and soak my socks and feet, I'd sail my paper boats, and I'd seek shelter in the haven of my tea chest, (must have been small) a beautifully designed and manicured with the wonderful illustrations of an articulate, smooth rispetto, with its unique abab ccdd rhyming, well done, I just wrote 2 minutes ago, a poem on contrasts, it must be the season. Well done, June, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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You remind me of my childhood when I'd jump in puddles, and soak my socks and feet, I'd sail my paper boats, and I'd seek shelter in the haven of my tea chest, (must have been small) a beautifully designed and manicured with the wonderful illustrations of an articulate, smooth rispetto, with its unique abab ccdd rhyming, well done, I just wrote 2 minutes ago, a poem on contrasts, it must be the season. Well done, June, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review this fun piece!
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Rainy Day Fun
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Great entry for the Rispetto for the Potlatch Challenge. The poem goes very well with the picture. I like the rhythm of the rispetto. Nice presentation too.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Rainy Day Fun
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Great entry for the Rispetto for the Potlatch Challenge. The poem goes very well with the picture. I like the rhythm of the rispetto. Nice presentation too.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review this fun piece!
Comment from Joan E.
No rain for us today--just June Gloom! Thanks for reminding us that with rain may come rainbows. I enjoyed your rhymes in your Rispetto and your vivid presentation. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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No rain for us today--just June Gloom! Thanks for reminding us that with rain may come rainbows. I enjoyed your rhymes in your Rispetto and your vivid presentation. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review this fun piece!
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very clever, creative and fun poem. The picture is wonderful. The rhyming is impeccable and unforced and the syllable count is very consistent which allows this poem to flow effortlessly. We really enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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This is a very clever, creative and fun poem. The picture is wonderful. The rhyming is impeccable and unforced and the syllable count is very consistent which allows this poem to flow effortlessly. We really enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review this fun piece!
Comment from Tootsie
This reminds me of my grandchildren when they came to visit years ago
We always had such fun and your poem shows how we did it.
I like your flare for descriptive words I can almost hear them giggling.
Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.
Tootsie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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This reminds me of my grandchildren when they came to visit years ago
We always had such fun and your poem shows how we did it.
I like your flare for descriptive words I can almost hear them giggling.
Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.
Tootsie
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review this fun piece!
