Spider Revisited
A poetic postscript12 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I totally enjoyed your poem about the spider! The whole poem flows so easily when reading aloud! The rhythm and rhyme fit perfectly the entire way through! God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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I totally enjoyed your poem about the spider! The whole poem flows so easily when reading aloud! The rhythm and rhyme fit perfectly the entire way through! God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Great poem and well written on the struggle within everyone living in this lost and fallen world. Some believe they are the spider others feel they are the fly but what if you were neither. 2 Corinthians 5:17 says, Therefore, if anyone is in Christ, he is a new creation; old things have passed away; behold, all things have become new. This former fly wishes you well, God bless you with new life.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Great poem and well written on the struggle within everyone living in this lost and fallen world. Some believe they are the spider others feel they are the fly but what if you were neither. 2 Corinthians 5:17 says, Therefore, if anyone is in Christ, he is a new creation; old things have passed away; behold, all things have become new. This former fly wishes you well, God bless you with new life.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from ameen786
A fascinating write, story-poem in rich and eerie vocabulary, eloquently mixed with free verse and rhyme and great flow; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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A fascinating write, story-poem in rich and eerie vocabulary, eloquently mixed with free verse and rhyme and great flow; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I liked this poem. I appreciated you sharing this. You made me think of different things. I like the rhyme and meter of this poem also. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I liked this poem. I appreciated you sharing this. You made me think of different things. I like the rhyme and meter of this poem also. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from nomi338
This is an awesome poem. Despite what it might say to anyone else, What it says to me is: If you are facing your ultimate doom, where escape seems impossible,. It is useless to fight against it, spend your time instead on figuring out how you got here, so that if a miracle happens and you escape, you will know to ever come here again. If you cannot escape, at least you will die knowing why.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This is an awesome poem. Despite what it might say to anyone else, What it says to me is: If you are facing your ultimate doom, where escape seems impossible,. It is useless to fight against it, spend your time instead on figuring out how you got here, so that if a miracle happens and you escape, you will know to ever come here again. If you cannot escape, at least you will die knowing why.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Yes! I can always count on you to catch me meaning, dear friend. You are like a great catcher that never misses my knuckleballs no matter how wild the pitch! Thank you for the six!
Comment from lancellot
Very well crafted. I dare say cleverly written. I like that of the whole Eden story from the point of view of the snake or the devil. It has a wicked flavor and flows so naturally, I can almost hear it.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Very well crafted. I dare say cleverly written. I like that of the whole Eden story from the point of view of the snake or the devil. It has a wicked flavor and flows so naturally, I can almost hear it.
Excellent.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I am humbled and flattered by the six. Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
A very interesting style, an unusual one, like a free verse with Rhyme. Like the ones one would find in a story narrative, that sounds like a metaphorical piece, of someone trapped under someone's spell. Language rich and a little creepy? But well done, a classic, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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A very interesting style, an unusual one, like a free verse with Rhyme. Like the ones one would find in a story narrative, that sounds like a metaphorical piece, of someone trapped under someone's spell. Language rich and a little creepy? But well done, a classic, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Pantygynt
It is strange how some of our writing hangs around like a bad smell that won't go away and other stuff vanishes from memory as if it had never been. I wonder if this excellent little poem in itself will lay the earlier one to rest in your troubled mind.
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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It is strange how some of our writing hangs around like a bad smell that won't go away and other stuff vanishes from memory as if it had never been. I wonder if this excellent little poem in itself will lay the earlier one to rest in your troubled mind.
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Deepali Pradhan
ð???ð???ð???loved it very much . You have spun a fine web indeed, drawing the reader in. Wish you good luck .. hope the elusive poetic end finds you soon. ( the spider within?
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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ð???ð???ð???loved it very much . You have spun a fine web indeed, drawing the reader in. Wish you good luck .. hope the elusive poetic end finds you soon. ( the spider within?
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Author I will probably need to look up the other poems to really get the total meaning of the your presentation. I will say though that your poem has good rhythm and rhyme and the flow of it while reading has smoothness. Your artwork greatly accommodates your poem as well. Best wishes for you in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Author I will probably need to look up the other poems to really get the total meaning of the your presentation. I will say though that your poem has good rhythm and rhyme and the flow of it while reading has smoothness. Your artwork greatly accommodates your poem as well. Best wishes for you in the contest
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I am humbled and flattered by the six. Thank you so much!
