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Sentence

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Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and wrote the story beautifully. You made me wish the story would continue so you could say I was hooked by your words. Nicely done. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Delighted you enjoyed it zanya
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an unusual entry for the Sentence writing prompt. It should do well in the contest with its surprise ending. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 22-Jun-2020
    You're welcome.