Woes
Four line poem15 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Well, hopefully our current state of affairs awakens something in us. We are all connected on this planet. What affects one affects all in the end. First, we need to listen - through the noise. Thanks for this short reminder that says volumes.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Well, hopefully our current state of affairs awakens something in us. We are all connected on this planet. What affects one affects all in the end. First, we need to listen - through the noise. Thanks for this short reminder that says volumes.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, yes I can definitely see this happening for many people. Especially those who never looked into or considered what is behind some of the things going on. I wonder how many people recently have said, "Well, I never thought about that."
A thought provoking poem with only four lines. Good work.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hmm, yes I can definitely see this happening for many people. Especially those who never looked into or considered what is behind some of the things going on. I wonder how many people recently have said, "Well, I never thought about that."
A thought provoking poem with only four lines. Good work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Boogienights
Your words ring true, I think the world has gone a little crazy, but I think it has made us all take a second look at issues that need to be addressed. Your poem is very timely.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Your words ring true, I think the world has gone a little crazy, but I think it has made us all take a second look at issues that need to be addressed. Your poem is very timely.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the few syllables allowed for this thought-provoking uplifting piece. Present circumstances should awaken a desire to be closer to others--when it is wise.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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You have made excellent use of the few syllables allowed for this thought-provoking uplifting piece. Present circumstances should awaken a desire to be closer to others--when it is wise.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great reveiw zamya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem about our worldly woes that are holding us back and make us feel weary and realize our inability to find our affinity.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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A very well-written four-line poem about our worldly woes that are holding us back and make us feel weary and realize our inability to find our affinity.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Very good word choices with
repetition of 'w' and 'a' sounds.
-A good message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-Very good word choices with
repetition of 'w' and 'a' sounds.
-A good message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome, zanya.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We face trials and challenges in life and they wear us down until eventually we have empathy for situations, wise words here, much enjoyed Zanya, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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We face trials and challenges in life and they wear us down until eventually we have empathy for situations, wise words here, much enjoyed Zanya, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It has happened so often in my life, that the negative experiences have sometimes been the catalyst towards a more positive existence. Patience is a virtue that leads so often to happiness. This small presentation says a great deal. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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It has happened so often in my life, that the negative experiences have sometimes been the catalyst towards a more positive existence. Patience is a virtue that leads so often to happiness. This small presentation says a great deal. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Superb review zanya
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Thanks
Comment from Teri7
Zanya, This is a very well written and very well worded Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words. That is cute imagery, but it kind of looks upside down to me. Best wishes in the contest. Maybe it's supposed to look upside down. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Zanya, This is a very well written and very well worded Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words. That is cute imagery, but it kind of looks upside down to me. Best wishes in the contest. Maybe it's supposed to look upside down. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Sometimes we're so amazed how these short styled poems have so much to say. Your poem is a lovely example of that. The picture is interesting. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Sometimes we're so amazed how these short styled poems have so much to say. Your poem is a lovely example of that. The picture is interesting. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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great review zanya
