Celtic Roots
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Conversations"Autobiography of an oldest son lost in a family
28 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I went back to read the previous part and saw I'd read it. I would have died right there had the teacher done that to me, but I can see what she was doing, but I think she could have been a bit more discreet. I'm glad you came through it alright in the end. And yes, being just good enough is awesome!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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I went back to read the previous part and saw I'd read it. I would have died right there had the teacher done that to me, but I can see what she was doing, but I think she could have been a bit more discreet. I'm glad you came through it alright in the end. And yes, being just good enough is awesome!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Sandra, thanks for the reread, I pulled after receiving a very bad review due to sloppy edits. So I went back in to correct the edits and missed the contest, so just added the writing to my autobiography that is a work in progress. And I would not change one thing about my childhood or early adult life!
Comment from richie b
JLR,
Thank you for sharing your story. On reflection
you were able to see how locked in and totally focused
you became to succeed.
Your teacher took a make it or break it stance with
you. There are more tactful ways of trying to be honest
and helpful.
I am happy you achieved your goals and now can
relax and enjoy your life. Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Richie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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JLR,
Thank you for sharing your story. On reflection
you were able to see how locked in and totally focused
you became to succeed.
Your teacher took a make it or break it stance with
you. There are more tactful ways of trying to be honest
and helpful.
I am happy you achieved your goals and now can
relax and enjoy your life. Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Richie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Richie, thanks as in all things in life I would not change one millisecond of it!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very well-written story of how you view yourself as a child dealing the a home-life you found unacceptable. It makes me angry with a teacher who was so insensitive as to embarrass you in class even if she did think it was a way of motivating your. Families are on welfare for many reasons they may be unable to control. The children should never have to suffer because of this. It is good that you've come through this are have found yourself able to forgive.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This is a very well-written story of how you view yourself as a child dealing the a home-life you found unacceptable. It makes me angry with a teacher who was so insensitive as to embarrass you in class even if she did think it was a way of motivating your. Families are on welfare for many reasons they may be unable to control. The children should never have to suffer because of this. It is good that you've come through this are have found yourself able to forgive.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Beth, thank you for your comments. Looking back, I know I can?t judge right or wrong in how things went down. I know I would not change one millisecond if my life. Have a perfect day, filled with sunshine and laughter!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful reflection and expression of where you came from and where you are now... and the tough journey there - well done! ;) :) And even though I did not have the 'beginnings' you had, I can relate to struggling to be 'just good enough' ... still a work in progress some times! ;) Thanx for sharing your heart, JL!! :)
what I say embarrass --> what I said embarrass
Weaned myself --> Having weaned myself
possible with others --> possible, with others
inner child," I thank --> inner child, "I thank
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Such a wonderful reflection and expression of where you came from and where you are now... and the tough journey there - well done! ;) :) And even though I did not have the 'beginnings' you had, I can relate to struggling to be 'just good enough' ... still a work in progress some times! ;) Thanx for sharing your heart, JL!! :)
what I say embarrass --> what I said embarrass
Weaned myself --> Having weaned myself
possible with others --> possible, with others
inner child," I thank --> inner child, "I thank
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Yvette, I appreciate the help! I, of course, would not want to change one millisecond of my childhood and early adult life.
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And that is as it should be, sir, for it ALL is what makes you who you are today! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sumpta
This is really a lovely and inspiring story. It's unfortunate that you had to pass through all these while growing up and even had to loose your mum at that early stage. But the most important thing is that you were courageous enough to move on and you made something good out of your life. Well done dear.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This is really a lovely and inspiring story. It's unfortunate that you had to pass through all these while growing up and even had to loose your mum at that early stage. But the most important thing is that you were courageous enough to move on and you made something good out of your life. Well done dear.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Sumpta, thank you for your review and positive and validating words, I would not want to change one millisecond of my life.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I reviewed this once then it disappeared. When it returned, no reviews were showing. I believe the teacher was wrong. That conversation should have been done in private. I'm glad you were able to work through this issue.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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I reviewed this once then it disappeared. When it returned, no reviews were showing. I believe the teacher was wrong. That conversation should have been done in private. I'm glad you were able to work through this issue.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Jan, thank you again, I receive a horrible rating and removed this to make edits that were overlooked. thanks again.
Comment from royowen
I think I commented on this, this morning, you've obviously polished it up and released it again, whatever it is I love the original one, and identified with it. Well done, blessings. Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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I think I commented on this, this morning, you've obviously polished it up and released it again, whatever it is I love the original one, and identified with it. Well done, blessings. Roy
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Roy, I got a terrible review about some edits that needed to be implemented. thanks again.
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Well done
Comment from papa55mike
There were many of those moments in my life just like these. Never feeling I've done enough. What a wonderfully written chapter. Please check your paragraph breaks and eliminate the space between, my inner child, " I thank you. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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There were many of those moments in my life just like these. Never feeling I've done enough. What a wonderfully written chapter. Please check your paragraph breaks and eliminate the space between, my inner child, " I thank you. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thanks much Mike, I appreciate your reviews!
