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Thoughts About Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Fearful Heart"
My Collection of Love Poetry

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written four-line poem about fear that can sometimes steal our blessings when we do not overcome our fear to do what we need to do.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is so true Trisha and I can identify with these words as sometimes it is better to do nothing than venture out into the affray, I think we tend to stay at home more when we are older, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
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Living in fear means not living in faith. Faith is the key to loving God. This is the message that I've taken away from your poem. This is a very beautiful and profound poem. The picture and what that says is the perfect compliment. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and said a lot in four lines. The quotation adds to your own words. This is a message I will try to remember. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from oliver818
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I enjoyed this poem because it's true. Fear is a huge problem for many people especially in dating and love and you summed that up nicely here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    You too, Oliver
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh you are so very right on this one, Trisha -- Beautiful message for the times and for the contest, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is correct in syllables per line. I like the image and quote. Your words are well-chosen and make a great statement that many have done in their lives. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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AAAWWW I like this one, you have put a lot of thought into this syllable restricted piece for the contest. I like the comparision of love and fear and the connection

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    A much appreciated review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Well this is a timely piece. I bet you get interesting reviews on this one. I wear a mask and isolate as much as possible. These seem to be concrete things that I have been advised to do for my health. It definitely cuts into my life's enjoyment. Are my actions fearful or wise. People who refuse to wear masks say I am fearful and hurting the economy. They think they are brave. I wonder.
Interesting topic. It's so good to hear from you again.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
    My focus was not current events, in general I have lost out on occasions where fear has held me back from relationships. I respect your view. Thanks for your positive review. It?s a ?me? world where sense ?flies out the window? for gratification. The numbers are increasing again, thanks to those who are ?brave?.
    Hugs, Trisha