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Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow,
James your poetry blows me away. You certainly wear you heart in you poetry. You are a caring man.
The below stanza demonstrates that it does not take much to display care, but these little things can certainly make a significance difference in someone's life.
I wish I could give you 10 stars for this poem, James.
A gentle squeeze of a hand
a tender glance at just the right moment
softly humming a tune
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Wow,
James your poetry blows me away. You certainly wear you heart in you poetry. You are a caring man.
The below stanza demonstrates that it does not take much to display care, but these little things can certainly make a significance difference in someone's life.
I wish I could give you 10 stars for this poem, James.
A gentle squeeze of a hand
a tender glance at just the right moment
softly humming a tune
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for this genuine and sincere review. You express yourself well, and you touch my heart with your kind words.
I am currently living in a skilled nursing facility, and displays of kindness are shown to make all the difference in a routine gesture such as retrieving ice water, or opening up the shades to let the sun shine through out the room. I am learning first hand what a difference an extra smile can make in my life and others like mine.
Your virtual 10 stars are much appreciated, as well as the sixth star rating and wonderful review. Listen to the softly humming tune in my thoughts as I send you good wishes for a great weekend.
Take care,
James
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, I too, wonder how many people truly care and have compassion for their fellow man or woman. Kindnesses, doled out like cookies whenever the purveyor sees fit. Although, a true heart beats nonstop and never wavers by choice. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Sometimes, I too, wonder how many people truly care and have compassion for their fellow man or woman. Kindnesses, doled out like cookies whenever the purveyor sees fit. Although, a true heart beats nonstop and never wavers by choice. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Ric, for this insightful synopsis of the theme running through my poem. I like your comparison of true kindness, with a 'true heart' which beats nonstop, never wavering by choice. Thank you for your excellent rating and review. Have a good upcoming week.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Janet Foor
Cradling Kindness is a Beautiful poem about caring Jesse. Outstanding message for this time in our lives. Your descriptions are sublime.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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Cradling Kindness is a Beautiful poem about caring Jesse. Outstanding message for this time in our lives. Your descriptions are sublime.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
Comment from zanya
A reflective piece of poetic writing here to enable us to see more clearly perhaps the impact our acts of kindness, even small ones, may have on those around us
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A reflective piece of poetic writing here to enable us to see more clearly perhaps the impact our acts of kindness, even small ones, may have on those around us
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a very nice poem with a good message. Thanks for sharing. I have nothing to recommend as far as the poem. It's a very decent free verse that you have shared.
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This is a very nice poem with a good message. Thanks for sharing. I have nothing to recommend as far as the poem. It's a very decent free verse that you have shared.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
Comment from estory
I liked the fluttering effect of the rhythm in this free verse piece, and the sentiments of a more profound experience of kindness, a kindness that comes from the soul, almost from the womb, rather than this electric, artificial emotion. Good contrast there. estory
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I liked the fluttering effect of the rhythm in this free verse piece, and the sentiments of a more profound experience of kindness, a kindness that comes from the soul, almost from the womb, rather than this electric, artificial emotion. Good contrast there. estory
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Well, that praying mantis may think the bird is coming in for a hug...
Let's hope and pray that holding hands together is something we can one day achieve... treasured as you say.
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Well, that praying mantis may think the bird is coming in for a hug...
Let's hope and pray that holding hands together is something we can one day achieve... treasured as you say.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
Comment from kahpot
Well your first line says volumes as this seems to be happening world wide, why does it take so much hardship for some to show kindness and then when time covers it, they resume their hatred, and if we all move in the right/same direction forever holding hands would not be out of reach, very well written with a wonderful message for all of us, a pleasure to read****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Well your first line says volumes as this seems to be happening world wide, why does it take so much hardship for some to show kindness and then when time covers it, they resume their hatred, and if we all move in the right/same direction forever holding hands would not be out of reach, very well written with a wonderful message for all of us, a pleasure to read****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you, my friend, for hitting the nail on the head about how hardship brings out temporary kindness that is too easily removed when "time covers it." I am so glad you enjoyed this poem, and I thank you for kind words and generous exceptional rating.
Your insights are well thought out and understood.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery, and message.
-I like the opening two verses,
and the cradle as a symbol of
innocence and purity,
and just being nice.
-Then, you present a good question
that raises a little doubt.
-These are excellent lines with
internal rhyme and an very
good concluding line.
-You have a good way with words.
-Lastly, you use "holding hands together"
as a symbol of what we need to do
to make this world a better place.
-Very well done; it was a lot to
think about in a very creative way!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery, and message.
-I like the opening two verses,
and the cradle as a symbol of
innocence and purity,
and just being nice.
-Then, you present a good question
that raises a little doubt.
-These are excellent lines with
internal rhyme and an very
good concluding line.
-You have a good way with words.
-Lastly, you use "holding hands together"
as a symbol of what we need to do
to make this world a better place.
-Very well done; it was a lot to
think about in a very creative way!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Wow! You cover so many parts you like in this review. I am taken back by the thoroughness, as well as thoughtfulness, in all your kind comments. I am sorry I did not get to this sooner. My apologies are sincere. You gave me so much to think about and to grow in my writing abilities. I am honored by your generous exceptional rating and extraordinary review. Thank you for reminding me that people like to be appreciated for their reviews. I most definitely appreciate yours.
Have a peaceful weekend,
Jesse
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and the review, Jesse. I was just sharing ideas from what you wrote. It's okay that you didn't respond earlier; I didn't finish my responses until yesterday.
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Thanks! I felt I hadn't been courteous because I waited too long to respond. I am glad to know I am not alone in regards to postponing my replies.
Jesse
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No, you are not alone in that regard, Jesse.
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Whew! That is good to know.
Enjoy your Sunday.
Jesse
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, kindness is sadly lacking these days. It is so much easier to let our hearts cradle one another. It takes much more energy to generate hatred and negativity. Thank you for reminding us to be human again.
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Yes, kindness is sadly lacking these days. It is so much easier to let our hearts cradle one another. It takes much more energy to generate hatred and negativity. Thank you for reminding us to be human again.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
