Decide Today
For hearts and lives await...23 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem using selected words about decision we all should make to choose love above hate because hate is a big burden to carry along inside your heart while love sets us free.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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A very well-written poem using selected words about decision we all should make to choose love above hate because hate is a big burden to carry along inside your heart while love sets us free.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from lancellot
A great contest entry and a sound reminder, but is what's going on really a matter of hate or something else. Is it possible that we are missing the forest for the trees? I sense a much deeper plan at play, and themes being shouted a mere illusion.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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A great contest entry and a sound reminder, but is what's going on really a matter of hate or something else. Is it possible that we are missing the forest for the trees? I sense a much deeper plan at play, and themes being shouted a mere illusion.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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You, Sir Lancellot, are a very 'eyes wide open' kind of guy, and I do not disagree even in the least. But as the painter paints different scenes so our poetry depicts different views... and the message here is one that all could embrace. 😉 Thanks so much for your review, Sir!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
I believe this particular writing challenge must have been difficult to undertake and I applaud your incorporation of all of these words into an artfully crafted poem - one that has relevance for today. Not only did you rise to the challenge, but you have written a poem that is well written a joy to read.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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I believe this particular writing challenge must have been difficult to undertake and I applaud your incorporation of all of these words into an artfully crafted poem - one that has relevance for today. Not only did you rise to the challenge, but you have written a poem that is well written a joy to read.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your awesome review!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Always with love, Yvette!
"Cause "hate" just is too burdensome to bear...
Powerful and timely.
Rhymical and soothing, despite the chaos in our world that inspired your exceptionally well-crafted words...
Beautiful here today...finally!
Hoping you enjoy this splendid day...
diane
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Always with love, Yvette!
"Cause "hate" just is too burdensome to bear...
Powerful and timely.
Rhymical and soothing, despite the chaos in our world that inspired your exceptionally well-crafted words...
Beautiful here today...finally!
Hoping you enjoy this splendid day...
diane
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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So true, my Beautiful Friend -- thank you for stopping by and for those wonderful stars! :) A quick post this evening and I'll be back tomorrow... day by day, I find it easier to smile! ;) :) Thank you for you!! ;)
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Just face north...and keep smiling.
I'm smiling right back at you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity that we do not heed the words of great leaders and learn from past mistakes as we seem to repeat deeds that once troubled us and so the cycle continues, fine words of wisdom here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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It is a pity that we do not heed the words of great leaders and learn from past mistakes as we seem to repeat deeds that once troubled us and so the cycle continues, fine words of wisdom here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you understanding and for your review!
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hello;
This was a brilliant use of the required words! My favorite stanza:
Flowers of blue and flowers of black
Adorn headstones across this great land,
Final good-byes from fam'ly and friends
Threaten to tear what our hearts can't withstand...
Floers of black and blue ... Timely and poignant and sad.
Thank you for creating this beautiful poem.
Be blessed,
Deb
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello;
This was a brilliant use of the required words! My favorite stanza:
Flowers of blue and flowers of black
Adorn headstones across this great land,
Final good-byes from fam'ly and friends
Threaten to tear what our hearts can't withstand...
Floers of black and blue ... Timely and poignant and sad.
Thank you for creating this beautiful poem.
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Minglement
This is an amazing, inciteful poem on love vs. hate. Hate - too heavy a burden for this heart to bear, for sure. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Would that more would read it. Well done, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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This is an amazing, inciteful poem on love vs. hate. Hate - too heavy a burden for this heart to bear, for sure. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Would that more would read it. Well done, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Oh, such a beautiful honor, Marcia - thank you for those stars and your wonderful comments! May we all find love enough today to drown all else! :)
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My pleasure and yes! Take care, Marci
Comment from richie b
Your poem echos the sentiments of the peaceful
protesters of today.
In all the legendary writings of the world; love has
always defeated hate.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Your poem echos the sentiments of the peaceful
protesters of today.
In all the legendary writings of the world; love has
always defeated hate.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Author, From reading this piece, its as though you were saying goodbye and you were going to end it all. But Im glad that this is just a poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Author, From reading this piece, its as though you were saying goodbye and you were going to end it all. But Im glad that this is just a poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Not sure how appealing to all to hear the words if a great leader in a time a of trial can be interpreted as 'saying goodbye ', but I am always fascinated by the many ways things are 'read' - thank you. I will go back and try to see that perspective in this.... Thank you so much for your review and your insight and have a wonderful week ahead! 🙂
Comment from diamondbogle
I love this! Its really poignant. I feel this one in my soul. I like how your poem flows nicely and the picture just adds so much emotion to it. Overall very good job with this little poem. It made me feel all the feels.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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I love this! Its really poignant. I feel this one in my soul. I like how your poem flows nicely and the picture just adds so much emotion to it. Overall very good job with this little poem. It made me feel all the feels.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review. I am glad that you enjoyed!
