Pleasant Surprise
Dancing with a stranger.3 total reviews
Comment from sibhus
Great flash, short and to the point. You have done a great job, giving the reader a complete story with just a few words. The setting seemed very real. Who can't a basement party from there youth. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Great flash, short and to the point. You have done a great job, giving the reader a complete story with just a few words. The setting seemed very real. Who can't a basement party from there youth. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thanks much for your read and comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story sets up the premise well. Fun party, relaxed crowd, mutual friend introduces two people, and mood-setting music to encourage romance. Nice set up for the desired results.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This story sets up the premise well. Fun party, relaxed crowd, mutual friend introduces two people, and mood-setting music to encourage romance. Nice set up for the desired results.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your read and review.
Comment from Mary Furlong
You have told a very satisfying story at a seemingly leisurely pace in just a few words. What an accomplishment! Very skillfully done. But you're giving away your age with that poodle skirt description. Just saying.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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You have told a very satisfying story at a seemingly leisurely pace in just a few words. What an accomplishment! Very skillfully done. But you're giving away your age with that poodle skirt description. Just saying.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Yeah, but at least I can remember. Thanks for your read and comments.
