Ballad of the Bluebells
Life of bluebells83 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Very nicely expressed poetry here again Linda. I like the first lines the best:
"listen carefully and hear tiny bells
playing delicate lullabies delicate lullabies
down in the dell
as they sway in the breeze
like small waves on the seas"
Bravo my friend. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Very nicely expressed poetry here again Linda. I like the first lines the best:
"listen carefully and hear tiny bells
playing delicate lullabies delicate lullabies
down in the dell
as they sway in the breeze
like small waves on the seas"
Bravo my friend. : ) Bob
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Bob. Linda
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You are most welcome myn friend. : ) Bob
Comment from lancellot
Oh yeah, I think you captured the scene of a glad of flowers drinking up the sun perfectly. In this troubled world it is easy to forget the great beauty and peace the world has built into it. For that we have to see nature as it is.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Oh yeah, I think you captured the scene of a glad of flowers drinking up the sun perfectly. In this troubled world it is easy to forget the great beauty and peace the world has built into it. For that we have to see nature as it is.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, lancellot, for your supportive interview. Linda
Comment from Gloria ....
Linda such a beautiful poem about a lovely flower. I always remember fondly coming across valleys filled with wild bluebells and utterly enthralled with their delicate beauty that almost seemed overwhelmed with all the greenery, but their brilliance shone through as your poem has so eloquently stated.
A lovely poem and many thanks for sharing today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Linda such a beautiful poem about a lovely flower. I always remember fondly coming across valleys filled with wild bluebells and utterly enthralled with their delicate beauty that almost seemed overwhelmed with all the greenery, but their brilliance shone through as your poem has so eloquently stated.
A lovely poem and many thanks for sharing today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, Gloria, for the lovely review. Keep safe and well. Linda
Comment from write hand blue
A pleasing and appropriate picture heads a nature poem. An easy read and not too long. Nice rhyming scheme with words like, sky & sigh, and night and delight. A nice enjoyable poem. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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A pleasing and appropriate picture heads a nature poem. An easy read and not too long. Nice rhyming scheme with words like, sky & sigh, and night and delight. A nice enjoyable poem. ~Mel~
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much Mel. Linda
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a very nice tribute to the bluebell. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is awesome. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and made me think of a flower I never see. Very good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This was a very nice tribute to the bluebell. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is awesome. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and made me think of a flower I never see. Very good job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you Earl! Linda
Comment from RGstar
Lovely..beautifully spiritual. Easy to immerse and be a part of the ambiance of the imagery. Beautifully expressed....love the usage of 'breeze/seas' Wishing you a lovely day. Nicely done.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Lovely..beautifully spiritual. Easy to immerse and be a part of the ambiance of the imagery. Beautifully expressed....love the usage of 'breeze/seas' Wishing you a lovely day. Nicely done.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you RGstar! Nice hearing from again. Keep safe and well out there. Linda
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Truly beautiful poem, Linda. Your words play on multiple senses, rather than setting just a visual scene and your chosen artwork is a perfect illustration to compliment the poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Truly beautiful poem, Linda. Your words play on multiple senses, rather than setting just a visual scene and your chosen artwork is a perfect illustration to compliment the poem.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Sherry for the kind review. Linda
Comment from Rachel Joyce
this poem is so lovely! the title just jumps out at you! the first few lines seemed a little off on the rhythm, but other than that, the poem was perfect! well done and God bless you!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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this poem is so lovely! the title just jumps out at you! the first few lines seemed a little off on the rhythm, but other than that, the poem was perfect! well done and God bless you!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Rachel, for reading and commenting. Linda
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you're very welcome!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Beautiful and very descriptive. this poem is written in a manner that
makes it very easy to read and understand. Very good work, the picture chosen is beautiful and fits the poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Beautiful and very descriptive. this poem is written in a manner that
makes it very easy to read and understand. Very good work, the picture chosen is beautiful and fits the poem perfectly.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading, Willie. Keep safe and well. Linda
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Ballad of the Bluebells, finds the flowers and feels the bell quality ringing out as the merry plants remind us that life is a beautiful thing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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This poem, The Ballad of the Bluebells, finds the flowers and feels the bell quality ringing out as the merry plants remind us that life is a beautiful thing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Bill, for reading. Linda
