The Flow of Nature
Free verse10 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Nature doing its thing without question will always astound and please me and your brought some ambient scenes here in your words Trisha, nature does not fail to deliver, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Nature doing its thing without question will always astound and please me and your brought some ambient scenes here in your words Trisha, nature does not fail to deliver, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Karen Estep
I loved the poem for the reason that it explains growth and existence. The flow of the water shows rejuvenation, and your graphic portrays this well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I loved the poem for the reason that it explains growth and existence. The flow of the water shows rejuvenation, and your graphic portrays this well. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ogden
I enjoyed your pleasant "The Flow of Nature. (If the illustration was clearer, it might reveal where the life cycle of your description begins.) Thanks for sharing.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your pleasant "The Flow of Nature. (If the illustration was clearer, it might reveal where the life cycle of your description begins.) Thanks for sharing.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Hi Don, I agree with you, thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome, Trisha, and thanks for the hugs!
Don
Comment from roof35
I especially like your closing line, "Return to replenish the earth." We need so much replenishing these days. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I especially like your closing line, "Return to replenish the earth." We need so much replenishing these days. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your very positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaah, yes -- that great circle of life but in the metaphor of the flowing waters... love that pink waterfall picture to support your thought-provoking free verse, Trisha!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Aaaah, yes -- that great circle of life but in the metaphor of the flowing waters... love that pink waterfall picture to support your thought-provoking free verse, Trisha!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you a very positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mia Twysted
I am left with the feeling of renewal. We are given a life to live and experience and when we are done we go back into that which we came to make it whole and great once again.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I am left with the feeling of renewal. We are given a life to live and experience and when we are done we go back into that which we came to make it whole and great once again.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your very positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear Author,
this is excellent!! awesome job. thanks so much from sharing this, it is really a pleasure to read, great job!!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Dear Author,
this is excellent!! awesome job. thanks so much from sharing this, it is really a pleasure to read, great job!!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your very positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Earl Corp
Wow, you just boiled a life cycle down to 15 lines. I'm not a free verse fan, but yours made sense, followed a story line, and it actually drew me in. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Wow, you just boiled a life cycle down to 15 lines. I'm not a free verse fan, but yours made sense, followed a story line, and it actually drew me in. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
Thank you for your very positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Vanna1
It is a nice theme. Really good presentation. The words came off a bit choppy. However the feeling conveyed is calm and beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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It is a nice theme. Really good presentation. The words came off a bit choppy. However the feeling conveyed is calm and beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Happy writing!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Choppy comes under free style too! Thanks so much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This free verse is so likeable, I like the taletelling, the free flow of thoughts, the word visuals and the word imagery; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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This free verse is so likeable, I like the taletelling, the free flow of thoughts, the word visuals and the word imagery; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, Al
Hugs,Trisha
