Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Sands after shower!

Cheer lives, flow fresh dear; past heat

Wind breeze cools summer.

Again you words speak of a season - this time Summer,
a time to be enjoyed by all.

Margaret

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR NATURAL REVIEW.

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is a nice piece of nature poetry about the contrasts in the sunny season and the rain that calms the atmosphere after the sun's onslaught. very well done

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

Showers and breezes can make summer more endurable. The heat is beautified by the comforts that nature brings to the picture. This is a nice celebration of summer.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR APPRECIABLE REVIEW.

Comment from Cornetist

Good

Again, almost chaotic incoherency. Your poems seem to be an amalgam of unconnected phrases that end up almost meaningless. I cannot fathom a complete or coherent thought or image.
Cornetist

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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THANKS.

Comment from L. Sherman

Good

Your poems are always a bit fragmented and less-than-cohesive, but this is the first where the second line really lost me. I can see how a parched landscape remains a desert after a shower and how a summer breeze can cool... I can even posit that 'fresh flow' is water streaming over cracked ground.... but 'dear' what? who?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from Child of the King

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your poetry and the explanations you list below each one. I am reading so many that is is hard to leave you a review on each. Do know that I am reading but may not be reviewing even if the pay is high. Kudos :-)

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR WONDERFUL REVIEW.

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

I was stumped with this purportedly well sounded with good order of imagination stand celebrating in a natural phenomena wording. I like breezes and assumed states of coolness.

An original flow past, this is?

DW

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR HONEST REVIEW.

Comment from prayingpoet

Good

(Read and write original reviews)
OK, here goes an original review. I live in the desert, so I understand "Wind breeze cools summer." But, I might understand a bit more if the line said "Wind cools summer breeze"

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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THANKS.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

lovely little 5'7'5 poem.

i found line 2 slightly confussing...

Cheer lives, flow fresh dear; past heat

I can see the rain fall upon the sesert, once rain stiops turns to fluffy golden sand, then cool wind flowing through summer heat.

great job

Regards
Tia

Have a great Easter

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR EXCELLENT REVIEW.

Comment from steevie

Excellent

An interesting analogy of rain and summer. One focuses on cooling and the other pertains to growth. A cycle of sorts that depend on each other.

steve

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.