O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Bayberry
This one doesn't read as smoothly as your 'Autumn' 5-7-5, but I still felt good experiencing cheerful freshness your words are offering. :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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This one doesn't read as smoothly as your 'Autumn' 5-7-5, but I still felt good experiencing cheerful freshness your words are offering. :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
If a person hasn't seen the desert after a wonderful cool rain, they are missing out on a wonder of the world. Gods Masterpiece. It seems the flowers can bloom in literally minutes. Every thing is fresh. Great, short poem, with a long, and enduring message. Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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If a person hasn't seen the desert after a wonderful cool rain, they are missing out on a wonder of the world. Gods Masterpiece. It seems the flowers can bloom in literally minutes. Every thing is fresh. Great, short poem, with a long, and enduring message. Carolyn
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR AUTHENTIC REVIEW.
Comment from visionary1234
I can't say that I agree with the minute-ness of your three stages, Al ... but nevertheless the words do, indeed, indicate the "flow" of summer (which at this stage everyone's looking forward to, right?)
:)S
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I can't say that I agree with the minute-ness of your three stages, Al ... but nevertheless the words do, indeed, indicate the "flow" of summer (which at this stage everyone's looking forward to, right?)
:)S
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW.
Comment from Shirley B
This poem s a little choppier than your autumn poem. It does not flow as smoothly. You have some great imagery words here. The syllable count is dead on. I just don't get the image you are going for. Sorry, Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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This poem s a little choppier than your autumn poem. It does not flow as smoothly. You have some great imagery words here. The syllable count is dead on. I just don't get the image you are going for. Sorry, Shirley
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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Comment from Irish Rain
ah! there you are again....i've gone from autumn to summer with your lovely words, and i love this as much as the last, what wonderful pictures you paint!
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ah! there you are again....i've gone from autumn to summer with your lovely words, and i love this as much as the last, what wonderful pictures you paint!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR WONDERFUL REVIEW.
Comment from J.R Dickinson
This actually does remind me of summer and how it feels. I find you have a special way of expressing seasons/events etcetera, and I thoroughly enjoy your creative ability to maintain your originality in all of your poems. You also make it easy to understand, if one is willing to comprehend them.
-J.R
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This actually does remind me of summer and how it feels. I find you have a special way of expressing seasons/events etcetera, and I thoroughly enjoy your creative ability to maintain your originality in all of your poems. You also make it easy to understand, if one is willing to comprehend them.
-J.R
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Allison78
I really enjoyed reading this poem! It is so refreshing and is a promise of things to come. I loved your imagery, great job on this poem!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this poem! It is so refreshing and is a promise of things to come. I loved your imagery, great job on this poem!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from ravenblack
sorry. too choppy and incoherent. in your notes, you states sands as desert, but the line reads as if after raindrops, sands fall. " flow fresh dear" - where did she/he enter the picture? 5-7-5 are meant to be the most precise use of words out of any of the forms. focus instead of throwing in the kitchen sink.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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sorry. too choppy and incoherent. in your notes, you states sands as desert, but the line reads as if after raindrops, sands fall. " flow fresh dear" - where did she/he enter the picture? 5-7-5 are meant to be the most precise use of words out of any of the forms. focus instead of throwing in the kitchen sink.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It is nice to see how the economy of words can say so much. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. It is nice to see how the economy of words can say so much. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW.
Comment from vkmack
The cool breeze flows over the reborn desert after the summer shower. What a lovely visual this is. The alliteration of the first line works so well. The heat is past; all is cool now. You paint such a nice visual here. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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The cool breeze flows over the reborn desert after the summer shower. What a lovely visual this is. The alliteration of the first line works so well. The heat is past; all is cool now. You paint such a nice visual here. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR ARTISTIC REVIEW.
