Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Sands? As in abrasion, stinging, the spoiling of food? Dustbowl, dead farms? Is it the ideal summer image? Interesting selection.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Will we oneday get to see
another season 1-2-3
Or must we wait, without a rhyme
for the next to find it's time

Or could it be that it is here
for me to look and find it near

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from Harlequin

Excellent

A certain characteristic of Summer well defined in this well written short poem of yours. Great imagery to bring us even closer to Summer. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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THANKS FOR FANTASTIC REVIEW.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the refreshment that comes with the rains after being in the desert so long.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from Nebukadneser

Excellent

You are the other side of brilliant with your amazing ability to create such a beautiful gem out of nothing, like your poem describe the beauty of the first shoots after the first rains of summer.
Well done
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from MidnightWriter4U

Excellent

Good 5-7-5 poetic work--true to syllable count. I am reminded of a fresh smell to the air after a summer shower. Seeds springing forth from the earth as new sprouts. The beauty of raindrops on roses. And, as your emphatic last line states, the cool, refreshing breezes feel like the earth is renewing itself as the heat is dissipated.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR INTELLIGENT REVIEW.

reply by MidnightWriter4U on 01-Apr-2013

You are very welcome. MN :)

Comment from AnonymousWisdom

Excellent

A nice little poem.
Matches 5-7-5 syllable count.
But:
What do you mean by "Sands" after shower?
And "Wind breeze" is redundant.
Thanks for sharing and happy Easter! :)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from Treischel

Excellent

You bring to life on the page how cooling rains bring comfort and enjoyment in the heat of the summer. Worked into this 5-7-5 formatted poem. It is a refreshing read.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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Comment from G.B. Smith

Average

Hello there again
Once again your poem lacks a definite structure. You see one thing in your mind, but when it hits paper, it is like you're high on something. I am sure you mean well, but this is poor poetry
Bear

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from Chikara

Excellent

This piece in particular challenges me to seek deeper meaning into your word selection. Without identifying "sands" as "deserts", I may not have fully understood what you're reaching for without a good minute of thinking. It illustrates chapped, thirsty earth and drives the beauty of refreshing rain home.

One thing I thought: "Wind breeze" seems like it could be one word in the word "zephyr", as it means exactly what these two words do and keeps your syllable count.

Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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THANKS FOR INSIGHTFUL REVIEW.