O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Gypsy Starchild
You really excel in this 5-7-5 poetry style... I really enjoy the way that you employ this form of poetry. You should consider creating a book that is a collection of your short works. :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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You really excel in this 5-7-5 poetry style... I really enjoy the way that you employ this form of poetry. You should consider creating a book that is a collection of your short works. :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your creative poem speaks appealingly of how, during hot weather, we relish the feeling of a rejuvenating breeze
that breathes life back into us.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Your creative poem speaks appealingly of how, during hot weather, we relish the feeling of a rejuvenating breeze
that breathes life back into us.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NATURAL REVIEW.
Comment from isurp
Thank you for the author's notes to explain that sands equals deserts. It allows your 5-7-5 to convey the relief and freshness of the rain which brings new life to the desert's barrenness and heat. -Steve
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the author's notes to explain that sands equals deserts. It allows your 5-7-5 to convey the relief and freshness of the rain which brings new life to the desert's barrenness and heat. -Steve
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from mariya gebura
It is a really good poem.
Sands after shower!
Cheer lives, flow fresh dear; past heat
Wind breeze cools summer.
I dont get how the picture and the words go togther.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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It is a really good poem.
Sands after shower!
Cheer lives, flow fresh dear; past heat
Wind breeze cools summer.
I dont get how the picture and the words go togther.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from RedGryffyn
Great poem. You brought it to life and I could almost feel wind blowing against my face. You followed the format and the words you wrote are very true. I liked how you divided each line into a different feeling. Interesting and well written. Thank you for sharing.
Red Gryffyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Great poem. You brought it to life and I could almost feel wind blowing against my face. You followed the format and the words you wrote are very true. I liked how you divided each line into a different feeling. Interesting and well written. Thank you for sharing.
Red Gryffyn
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREDITABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Cedar
I like this one. After a cool shower of rain in the desert lands, everything comes alive with cheer and celebration. Then the cool breezes brings relief to all its inhabitants.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I like this one. After a cool shower of rain in the desert lands, everything comes alive with cheer and celebration. Then the cool breezes brings relief to all its inhabitants.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR EXPRESSIVE REVIEW.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another wonderful write. How true is the relief of rain after a dry spell or a cool breeze after the heat. These are things to look forward to, enjoy and give thanks for~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Another wonderful write. How true is the relief of rain after a dry spell or a cool breeze after the heat. These are things to look forward to, enjoy and give thanks for~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FAIR REVIEW.
Comment from EmanLNorman
Wow that was really impressive you managed to make the reader actually feel those seasons just in a few simple words. There is no criticism here perfectly written. Thank you for that.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Wow that was really impressive you managed to make the reader actually feel those seasons just in a few simple words. There is no criticism here perfectly written. Thank you for that.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR WONDERFUL REVIEW.
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, after it rains, usually, in the summer it does become like a desert....Cheer, represents, I believe, get happy & think past the heat & that the wind will cool the heat...Though, I prefer my air conditioner, otherwise become a withered flower..If, you have to live outside, or without an air-conditioner, I can see how mind over matter does make the difference & relief will come in a breeze..
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Yes, after it rains, usually, in the summer it does become like a desert....Cheer, represents, I believe, get happy & think past the heat & that the wind will cool the heat...Though, I prefer my air conditioner, otherwise become a withered flower..If, you have to live outside, or without an air-conditioner, I can see how mind over matter does make the difference & relief will come in a breeze..
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREATIVE REVIEW.
Comment from Oatmeal
Alcreator Litt Dear,
Your arrangement here is very creative. Your feelings are expressed well. I love the summer.
No problems noted.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Alcreator Litt Dear,
Your arrangement here is very creative. Your feelings are expressed well. I love the summer.
No problems noted.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FAIR REVIEW.
