Comment from JoAnna Lee

Excellent

Nicely Done

Fit the poem type

Flowed well

Imagery good

Where I sit now typing this, I could sure use a shower and a cool breeze!

Thank-you for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from justswf

Excellent

This is again a beautiful piece...Your selection of artwork enhances your poetry to another level...Almost does the thinking for the reader...This has great deep meaning...And hope...What every good poem should have...

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from mblundell68

Excellent

Lives after a shower in summer!
Summer;
interesting collection of words; but if you examine the photo included sands and showers, are the fall out after a volcano irruption---heat is lava---and the cool breeze, is the aftermath.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Good

I don't know that I have any kind of a specific problem with this one.

It's a little diffuse, maybe, but that might just be my inability to appreciate the Haiku form.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from mayflowerbg

Excellent

Hi, ACWriter!

Rain is blessed when it falls on sand.
Activates new fresh life.
I finally saw the picture.
Nice!

Across:RAIN

M.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from Hetty

Excellent

Hi Alcreator,

Hmmm...yummy! I loved these words rolling around on my tongue as I read this and found a piece of summer in my mouth.

I loved reading this and have no suggestions for change.
Hetty

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2006

Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

You have action, activation and fruition. It's also an amusing little poem. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for an excellent offering. Ray.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2006

Comment from AK

Excellent

really vivid pictures

traditional haiku well written with flair and

structural themes intact

thanks for a great read

ami

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2006

Comment from J. Bond

Excellent

This was interesting and professionally done. It was poetically and artisitcally sound. Liked the creative idea of a desert after a rainfall (I believe?). Inventive and entertaining. Well done, a great piece. Cheers.

J

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2006

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Dear alcreator, Oh you make summer much cooler then it is especially in FL. I live in Vermont where we don't have sand, just the cool green mountains. Glad I read this easy and short piece with so much to tell.
Gert sherwood

 Comment Written 30-May-2006