Comment from Brantley88

Excellent

You approached this Senyru from a very unique angle. It says many things with very few syllables. I think that is very noteworthy.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from passions4life

Excellent

Love it! Glad to hear winter is over... but is it over for some poor souls?

Thanks for the images your words portrayed.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from StanVan

Excellent

Hi Alcreator Writer, you have such a knack of saying several meaningful things at once with a few short words. I like the way the holes are filled in by the person reading it and I like the way it fit into haiku form and still flowed nicely. Good job. Thanks, Stan

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from Snitz

Excellent

I enjoyed your choice of color for this type of poetry. I am not well versed in Haiku but what little I do know, I thought this was very well done. and a little humor in there too... Good luck.. Snitz

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from geetika sethi

Excellent

SHORT N SWEET SO PERFECTLY NEAT..SIMPLE YET MEANINGFUL
WAS A REAL TREAT TO READ..SO WELL IT DESCRIBED THE FEELING..THE CONTRAST OF A SEASON TO THE RICH AND POOR...GREAT CONCEPTUALISATION..
..THANKS FOR SHARING..
GAPS

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

I really like haiku and have written a smattering of them. They are very restrictive in that they allow so few lines and syllables to say volumes. Your count is spot on and your subject has some humor which I find charming....well done...cheyenne

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006

Comment from 96744mom

Excellent

What an awesome haiku piece written. Filled with color, energy and motivation! Great write, no changes are needed. I enjoyed this alot.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2006