Knot again !
Recently married (senryu)28 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this dryly humorous piece. Many will be able to relate to. I can.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this dryly humorous piece. Many will be able to relate to. I can.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Aw- thanks for that - so nice to win now and again!! love your review zanya
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Zanya: congratulations on being first!!! Many don't stick around
to make marriage last. I've been married 32 years. Hope you have
a sweetheart. Enjoy your weekend. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Zanya: congratulations on being first!!! Many don't stick around
to make marriage last. I've been married 32 years. Hope you have
a sweetheart. Enjoy your weekend. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thanks for those congrats !! yes the married state is going through a tough time - yet it's one of human kinds great institutions, in my opinion!!zanya
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Excellent question. Do we ever need to get it "right?" Or are we one of the many who serialize monogamy, skipping merrily from one relationship to another, not ever needing to get it just 'right'? If we have a few good relationships in our lifetime, maybe that is enough? I like the picture of the knot tied just so to emphasize the message. Thank you for sharing your point of view on marriage.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Excellent question. Do we ever need to get it "right?" Or are we one of the many who serialize monogamy, skipping merrily from one relationship to another, not ever needing to get it just 'right'? If we have a few good relationships in our lifetime, maybe that is enough? I like the picture of the knot tied just so to emphasize the message. Thank you for sharing your point of view on marriage.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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And thanks for sharing those interesting sentiments - this little poem generated a lot of interesting commentary - it's a topic that matters, I guess? zanya
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Hello Zanya.
I think you guess right. A short story on the subject would draw a lot of attention, I believe. Just a thought. I am glad you liked my review.
Have a pleasant day,
Jesse
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I found
this poem to state what is so true! This short poem says a lot. The
artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I found
this poem to state what is so true! This short poem says a lot. The
artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from royowen
This is an extraordinary answer to this senryu prompt, you've solved the question of all broken relationships, just tie a knot and wait for the answer. Well done Zanya, good job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This is an extraordinary answer to this senryu prompt, you've solved the question of all broken relationships, just tie a knot and wait for the answer. Well done Zanya, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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What a superb review - it's an honor to receive it zanya
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Well done
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I love the knots metaphor. I think you did really well with this poem. It was clever and a good use of your syllables. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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I love the knots metaphor. I think you did really well with this poem. It was clever and a good use of your syllables. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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And thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Therese Caron
What an appropriate poem about so much of today's outlook on marriage. Very creative idea, with the image you chose complementing the poem perfectly. I see you won the contest - congratulations!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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What an appropriate poem about so much of today's outlook on marriage. Very creative idea, with the image you chose complementing the poem perfectly. I see you won the contest - congratulations!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you are doing well during this global pandemic, and chaos in our world. This is a cute and hilarious Senryu poem. Great imagery of the "tied knot." Having more than one knot would have been cool also. Then, your poem's message is too cool and very cleverly written. Getting married again is always a challenge in itself, but how many knots does it take to get it right? So, funny!! Well-done. Poem's requirement met.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Hello,
I pray you are doing well during this global pandemic, and chaos in our world. This is a cute and hilarious Senryu poem. Great imagery of the "tied knot." Having more than one knot would have been cool also. Then, your poem's message is too cool and very cleverly written. Getting married again is always a challenge in itself, but how many knots does it take to get it right? So, funny!! Well-done. Poem's requirement met.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking time to read and pen a superb review zanya
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You are so welcome.
Comment from Bichon
Haha, I enjoyed this short five seven five Senryu. I'm too young to be married myself, but I still understood the humorous message. When people are married five or six times, it definitely springs to mind.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Haha, I enjoyed this short five seven five Senryu. I'm too young to be married myself, but I still understood the humorous message. When people are married five or six times, it definitely springs to mind.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing those sentiments zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about just being married for another time after several marriages failed before some people never give up trying, the best feeling is to be just married that wears off after time and some need to have that feeling over again.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about just being married for another time after several marriages failed before some people never give up trying, the best feeling is to be just married that wears off after time and some need to have that feeling over again.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Yes it's a mystery sometimes ! thanks for sharing zanya
