The Peace Of Jesus
It lives in all of us.15 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
So beautiful so profound so relevant. Your heart is so rooted in love and in the love of Jesus. This poem truly glorifies God and at the same time points out that so many hearts are not in the glory of God. I'm not sure that the fifth verse doesn't have a typo with "a loving peace not ("has" should this be "as") the world provides it. Despite this typo this is really beautiful.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
So beautiful so profound so relevant. Your heart is so rooted in love and in the love of Jesus. This poem truly glorifies God and at the same time points out that so many hearts are not in the glory of God. I'm not sure that the fifth verse doesn't have a typo with "a loving peace not ("has" should this be "as") the world provides it. Despite this typo this is really beautiful.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from roof35
This is an inspiring poem. I did question one of your lines: "A loving peace not has the world provides it." Changing this line could bump up on the rating system. Your faith does come shining through. Thanks for making me think.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
This is an inspiring poem. I did question one of your lines: "A loving peace not has the world provides it." Changing this line could bump up on the rating system. Your faith does come shining through. Thanks for making me think.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sally Law
I just used my last six and ache to give you one for this beautiful prayer/poem. I'm glad to hear it has reached beyond FanStory to the world. I stand beside you today in this matter. For its only in Christ we find inner and outer peace. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
I just used my last six and ache to give you one for this beautiful prayer/poem. I'm glad to hear it has reached beyond FanStory to the world. I stand beside you today in this matter. For its only in Christ we find inner and outer peace. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally xo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Hi, Sally. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ben Colder
Need a seven for this great message. So true and excellent. Though the storms of life gives its darkness, the peace our Lord provides is beyond words.
My blessings I share this day with you.
HE lIVES +
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
Need a seven for this great message. So true and excellent. Though the storms of life gives its darkness, the peace our Lord provides is beyond words.
My blessings I share this day with you.
HE lIVES +
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Hi, Ben. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautiful offering of both instruction and of testimony, Papa - beautifully worded and flows nicely... especially for the audience for whom you said it was written1 ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
Such a beautiful offering of both instruction and of testimony, Papa - beautifully worded and flows nicely... especially for the audience for whom you said it was written1 ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Hi, Yvette. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike