Anything is possible.
Our punishment for turning a blinds eye.3 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Force
There are a lot of good individual lines here. A lot of cultural implications that lead to some of the stated confusions. aside from some spelling missteps. (here/hear-there/their) this has the makings of a powerful poem. Steve
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There are a lot of good individual lines here. A lot of cultural implications that lead to some of the stated confusions. aside from some spelling missteps. (here/hear-there/their) this has the makings of a powerful poem. Steve
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Open to a number of interpretations, your free verse certainly presents the reader with topics of self- and group-reflection... :) I guess I'm not sure of the use of the parenthetical phrases [i.e., the use of parentheses] as the statements are incomplete if the phrases are eliminated...? Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
im forced --> I'm forced
not see, and laughter --> not see and laughter
do,(to explain there intruders ability --> do (to explain their intruders' ability
ones)_ --> ones)
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Open to a number of interpretations, your free verse certainly presents the reader with topics of self- and group-reflection... :) I guess I'm not sure of the use of the parenthetical phrases [i.e., the use of parentheses] as the statements are incomplete if the phrases are eliminated...? Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
im forced --> I'm forced
not see, and laughter --> not see and laughter
do,(to explain there intruders ability --> do (to explain their intruders' ability
ones)_ --> ones)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU
I could add anything is possible. Only a fool does not change their mind. The image too explains the confusion eluded therein. Its the changing of believes challenged by circumstances
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I could add anything is possible. Only a fool does not change their mind. The image too explains the confusion eluded therein. Its the changing of believes challenged by circumstances
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
