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I can't breathe

Letter to God

8 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a beautiful, deeply felt prayer to God for our great country, America. It should do well in the Dear God, writing contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Hi Rebecca, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; it's very encouraging, thank you very much.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 10-Jun-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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This old world sure needs something to help straighten it out. Bad things are happening to good people. Bad people have gone off the deep end for sure! I don't even think the president or anyone else knows what to do. I sure hope He comes soon. We need Him now more than ever! Good luck with the contest~
Patty

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Hello Patty, I appreciate your time and the thoughtful review; thank you very much.
reply by Patty Palmer on 10-Jun-2020
    You're very welcome!
    Patty
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Great entry for the, Dear God, writing prompt contest. Your letter expressed to God your concern straight from your heart. You have a valid reason and expressed yourself clearly. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Gypsy my friend, very kind of you to visit; I appreciate your time and pleased that you like the write; thank you.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and short letter to God you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good heart felt words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Hello Teri, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; pleased that you like the letter; thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
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This is as good an entry as you'll get in a letter to God. And yes, no one, but no one has the right to steal what God has freely given to men. That is the right to breath. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings. Roy

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
    I thank you sir, very kind of you.
reply by royowen on 08-Jun-2020
    Bless you
Comment from Mia Twysted
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If only we would all just see each other as fellow humans maybe some of this craziness would come to an end.

I did find one error: "did You gave anybody" Should that not be "did You give anybody."

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
    Hello Mia, thank you for the visit and the insights; you're correct about the grammatical error; I'll fix that now; appreciate your time.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This letter to God, I Can't Breathe, pulls our attention directly to the tragic killing of a man by a bad cop. Let's hope God mends our land.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
    Thank you my friend.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I wish this would never have happened; it started many scenarios that have caused an uproar in our country. I hope we can again find peace, less coronavirus and an upgrade in economy. Pray.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
    Hi Rosemary, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you.