Dear God, It's Me Again
Telling God what's on my mind.15 total reviews
Comment from TommyWrites
This is beautiful, and deeply touching. There is something so deep, and touching when someone shares a prayer. It is not just mere words, but a song from the heart to our Creator. Truly wonderful!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This is beautiful, and deeply touching. There is something so deep, and touching when someone shares a prayer. It is not just mere words, but a song from the heart to our Creator. Truly wonderful!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting this. I felt a little strange about sharing something so personal.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a delightful, heartfelt prayer-in-a-letter that you allow us to 'listen in on'. It mentions several things that are heavy on the hearts and minds of most everyone these days. My daughter just sent me a personal message on these exact same things! (Great minds!) haha
Some notes, if I may?
1.) She('s) been in bed over two weeks now.
2.) and (i)f somebody we didn't vote for got elected, we got over it,
3.) I'm including myself (in) that. I tend to think
4.) from the beginning of your post:
--> and I don't think I gave you a chance to respond.
--> noticed that you didn't give Him much time to respond/speak here either -- hahaha -- you might mention this or change your beginning a little?
Thanks for a well-presented piece. This should do great in the voting. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a delightful, heartfelt prayer-in-a-letter that you allow us to 'listen in on'. It mentions several things that are heavy on the hearts and minds of most everyone these days. My daughter just sent me a personal message on these exact same things! (Great minds!) haha
Some notes, if I may?
1.) She('s) been in bed over two weeks now.
2.) and (i)f somebody we didn't vote for got elected, we got over it,
3.) I'm including myself (in) that. I tend to think
4.) from the beginning of your post:
--> and I don't think I gave you a chance to respond.
--> noticed that you didn't give Him much time to respond/speak here either -- hahaha -- you might mention this or change your beginning a little?
Thanks for a well-presented piece. This should do great in the voting. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and for helping with the grammar. I think I'm bad about not letting God have time to answer, but when I go out in nature that is when he usually does the talking.
Comment from Teri7
This is so precious and so heart felt. I could totally relate to every word you said. I may not have the same friends or family that have problems, but somehow I am the one that hears about it and prays about it. Sometimes it seems like I do all the talking to and never give the Lord a chance to respond. There are a few places that need a comma, but nothing big that I saw. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This is so precious and so heart felt. I could totally relate to every word you said. I may not have the same friends or family that have problems, but somehow I am the one that hears about it and prays about it. Sometimes it seems like I do all the talking to and never give the Lord a chance to respond. There are a few places that need a comma, but nothing big that I saw. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Teri, Thatnk you so much for reading this and commenting. I didn't know if it was Okay to write something so personal but I'm glad you could relate.
Comment from Bill Schott
This letter to God, Dear God It's Me Again, finds the letter writer holding up a friend and both thanking God for help and asking for more. Friends and the world in general should be in all our letters. Nice job with this.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This letter to God, Dear God It's Me Again, finds the letter writer holding up a friend and both thanking God for help and asking for more. Friends and the world in general should be in all our letters. Nice job with this.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you Bill. I'm very concerned about this friend. She is like a sister to me. I've been talking to God about her for a while.
Comment from Tootsie
Thank you for this entertaining letter. I know things are bad but this reminds me of my friend. she calls me a couple of times a week but I know I am there for at least 2 hours. She covers everything bad or good. It's a real roundup. At least you didn't give God all the directions on how to handle situations,
I thought you have great faith and I admire that. I always have a talk to god every morning to help me through the day. So keep up the good work and remember God ; loves you so much
Love Tootsie
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you for this entertaining letter. I know things are bad but this reminds me of my friend. she calls me a couple of times a week but I know I am there for at least 2 hours. She covers everything bad or good. It's a real roundup. At least you didn't give God all the directions on how to handle situations,
I thought you have great faith and I admire that. I always have a talk to god every morning to help me through the day. So keep up the good work and remember God ; loves you so much
Love Tootsie
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you Tootsie, I appreciate your reviewing this. My friend calls everyday and today she talked a long time leaving me not feeling very good about her situation.
