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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
For your question, I thought the prayer was a lovely touch, and I'm sure many men say a prayer like that before they go into action. Leave it in. This was a really excellent part, Barb, and I loved the length, I really didn't want it to end. Everything is all set, and we know that Edger is going to make a full recovery which will delight Mac when she has been rescued. That they love each other, was obvious to us your readers, even if it wasn't to the couple for a while. Hopefully, they will also learn where Logan's sister came into all this. We know it wasn't planned. Well done, my friend, this was brilliant! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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For your question, I thought the prayer was a lovely touch, and I'm sure many men say a prayer like that before they go into action. Leave it in. This was a really excellent part, Barb, and I loved the length, I really didn't want it to end. Everything is all set, and we know that Edger is going to make a full recovery which will delight Mac when she has been rescued. That they love each other, was obvious to us your readers, even if it wasn't to the couple for a while. Hopefully, they will also learn where Logan's sister came into all this. We know it wasn't planned. Well done, my friend, this was brilliant! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
