The Adventures of Justin Thyme
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Adventures of Justin Thyme 2"Crime mystery fiction
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Comment from judiverse
Twenty is quite an astute young man. He should do well in the detecting business himself. He is onto the fact that he and his grandfather, the Sheriff, were being observed through the mirror. He also realizes that Richard must have had a woman in the room with him when the tiara was stolen. Richard isn't too keen on having that fact brought out. As they say, "When the cat's away." And his parents were away at the time. Great story, and very engaging characters. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Twenty is quite an astute young man. He should do well in the detecting business himself. He is onto the fact that he and his grandfather, the Sheriff, were being observed through the mirror. He also realizes that Richard must have had a woman in the room with him when the tiara was stolen. Richard isn't too keen on having that fact brought out. As they say, "When the cat's away." And his parents were away at the time. Great story, and very engaging characters. judi
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Judi. Yes, Richard is a piece of work. We haven't seen the last of him or his staff.
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You're welcome. I really liked the young Twenty. Great powers of deduction. As young as he is, I can imagine him being attracted to those books. judi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Sometimes a contest is so good that can be a continuation to stories or even books. I like your story so I will keep an eye on it. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next story.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Sometimes a contest is so good that can be a continuation to stories or even books. I like your story so I will keep an eye on it. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next story.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is interesting that you have kept the character living, as in this case of missing Tiara and the adventures are entertaining with the fantastic order of taletelling; continuous ending; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
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It is interesting that you have kept the character living, as in this case of missing Tiara and the adventures are entertaining with the fantastic order of taletelling; continuous ending; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are doing a wonderful job keeping Twenty alive. I like the story and can't wait for the real story behind the missing tiara. It will surely be a great tale, and embarrassing for Richard. Good job of writing.
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You are doing a wonderful job keeping Twenty alive. I like the story and can't wait for the real story behind the missing tiara. It will surely be a great tale, and embarrassing for Richard. Good job of writing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from oliver818
This is a very well written story, I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you build up the characters. They come across clearly through the dialogue and the movement of the scenes works well. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to part 2z
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This is a very well written story, I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you build up the characters. They come across clearly through the dialogue and the movement of the scenes works well. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to part 2z
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
