Disregard For Life
Under 10 words: It's really quite black and white.15 total reviews
Comment from emmaysavage
Thanks so much for your rather cynical viewpoint -- a pertinent comment on modern life. I identified strongly with this poem. Keep up the good work
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for your rather cynical viewpoint -- a pertinent comment on modern life. I identified strongly with this poem. Keep up the good work
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I find it hard not to be cynical about so many things these days.
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
WOW!!!
This was a great and very enjoyable poem for me!!!!! I don't know HOW you write a poem with less than 10 words so beautifully, but however you wrote it, this was AMAZING! I also liked how you got the idea for the poem!!!! AWESOME!!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar!! :)
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WOW!!!
This was a great and very enjoyable poem for me!!!!! I don't know HOW you write a poem with less than 10 words so beautifully, but however you wrote it, this was AMAZING! I also liked how you got the idea for the poem!!!! AWESOME!!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar!! :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
There are so many commands that are not followed and that might well be the reason everything is going crazy. All of this is crazy we should see ourselves as one people, one species.
Good luck in the contest.
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There are so many commands that are not followed and that might well be the reason everything is going crazy. All of this is crazy we should see ourselves as one people, one species.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
Comment from sherrygreywolf
You've written a powerful and timely poem that meets the requirements for the contest. Such and important message in so few words. Good luck. Stay safe and healthy.
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You've written a powerful and timely poem that meets the requirements for the contest. Such and important message in so few words. Good luck. Stay safe and healthy.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the
Under Ten Competition writing prompt contest. Good word count. The presentation is nice. Great imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the
Under Ten Competition writing prompt contest. Good word count. The presentation is nice. Great imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
The devil is behind and encouraging all the hatred, the violence, the killings, the rioting, racism, and the mob mentality. Of course, he wants everyone to ignore the Ten Commandments.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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The devil is behind and encouraging all the hatred, the violence, the killings, the rioting, racism, and the mob mentality. Of course, he wants everyone to ignore the Ten Commandments.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. It seems for many it is easier to listen to the devil than to listen to God. I appreciate your time.
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So true!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the few words the prompt allows to send a powerful message about the scary, chaotc atmosphere we're living in. When mob mentality takes over, the value of lives seems to take a novedive for some!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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You have made excellent use of the few words the prompt allows to send a powerful message about the scary, chaotc atmosphere we're living in. When mob mentality takes over, the value of lives seems to take a novedive for some!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. The mob mentality's loss of control is scary.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written under ten word poem about the ten commandments that once meant a lot to everyone who believed in God, now everyone ignores the ten commandments whenever it suits them.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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A very well-written under ten word poem about the ten commandments that once meant a lot to everyone who believed in God, now everyone ignores the ten commandments whenever it suits them.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for reviewing! The decline in obedience to rules of morality to help a society has fractured our society.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In today's state of living, at the instance of racial discrepancy, brutality and inequality, obeying Ten Commandments is absolute; well said, thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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In today's state of living, at the instance of racial discrepancy, brutality and inequality, obeying Ten Commandments is absolute; well said, thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Amen.
Comment from oliver818
Wow this is a Powerful Little poem. I enjoyed reading this. It has a strong clear message which comes across well. I think it's a very good entry for this competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Wow this is a Powerful Little poem. I enjoyed reading this. It has a strong clear message which comes across well. I think it's a very good entry for this competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. You can tell I am upset about our fractured society.
