Give It A Shot
Poem about love.2 total reviews
Comment from Diana Kane
Seems like you had most of the possibilities of love here. It's pretty fast pace. I liked it. Enjoyed all the rhyming. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Seems like you had most of the possibilities of love here. It's pretty fast pace. I liked it. Enjoyed all the rhyming. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Glad you enjoyed the read... it won?t be in the contest ..
it was supposed to be a free style entry .. the committee advised me I had too much rhyme and gave me the opportunity to edit but I declined.
Keep safe !
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That?s interesting. I sometimes have the opposite problem. It is what it is though. I still think it was great.
Comment from paleface
The flow was nice and the rhymes seemed to line up nicely. Great job. Keep up the creative thoughts. I'll read more from this author. Lovely poem. Good job
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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The flow was nice and the rhymes seemed to line up nicely. Great job. Keep up the creative thoughts. I'll read more from this author. Lovely poem. Good job
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the positive response ..
unfortunately there was too much rhyme for a free style entry ...the committee gave me the chance to edit but I decline.
C?est la vie ( biggrin)
