Anger 'Gainst Anger ain't Workin
A thought on the chaos in today's world16 total reviews
Comment from Sumpta
This is so true. Unlike Love, anger and blame creates more problem instead of bringing solutions. We need to calm our nerves and think more on helping and accommodating one another especially this period of the Corona Virus Pandemic. Welldone dear.
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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This is so true. Unlike Love, anger and blame creates more problem instead of bringing solutions. We need to calm our nerves and think more on helping and accommodating one another especially this period of the Corona Virus Pandemic. Welldone dear.
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you Sumpta. I appreciate your stopping by to comment on my work. I hope we see a return of wisdom emerge from our world leaders in the very near future
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I felt your angst here Bob about the virus and it will exist for a little while longer and it will eventually die out naturally, but the threat will unfortunately still be there. There will be a vaccine in the end, but it won't save everybody. Your poem is well rhymed and your message is poignant, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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I felt your angst here Bob about the virus and it will exist for a little while longer and it will eventually die out naturally, but the threat will unfortunately still be there. There will be a vaccine in the end, but it won't save everybody. Your poem is well rhymed and your message is poignant, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you Dolly. How are things holding up in England? My wife is originally from Coventry.
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England is doing just fine right now, the lockdown is slowly being eased, love Dolly x
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells anger against anger are not working and suggests us to work with a solution to banish the virus; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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This tells anger against anger are not working and suggests us to work with a solution to banish the virus; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to review my writing. Hope everything is well in your part of the world.
Comment from Diana Kane
Not only are the sentiments here well spoken but the rhymes are good and the flow is fantastic. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you For sharing this.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Not only are the sentiments here well spoken but the rhymes are good and the flow is fantastic. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you For sharing this.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you Diana for reading and reviewing my writing. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Righting this wrong - I really like this expression and yeah let's hope this happens sooner than later. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Righting this wrong - I really like this expression and yeah let's hope this happens sooner than later. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you Iza. I really appreciate your stopping by and reviewing my work. And I agree with you comment in hoping a solution quickly appears.
Comment from Gloria ....
I like how you framed your thesis within a dream, which is what this ungodly mess seems like at the moment. Disaster seems to come in threes and here we are. Perhaps you are right the virus has altered our thought processes.
Excellent poem with just enough reference points to understand the gist and yet still maintain a universal appeal.
A fine read this evening.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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I like how you framed your thesis within a dream, which is what this ungodly mess seems like at the moment. Disaster seems to come in threes and here we are. Perhaps you are right the virus has altered our thought processes.
Excellent poem with just enough reference points to understand the gist and yet still maintain a universal appeal.
A fine read this evening.
Gloria
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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The first two lines actually came to me while I slept and the rest of it took most of the day. Originally it was going to be about Donald Trump but I thought that might offend too many.
