Wisdom
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are so right. We never learn. Those whose faith and trust are in God, may someday be able to influence the hotheads of society.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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You are so right. We never learn. Those whose faith and trust are in God, may someday be able to influence the hotheads of society.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you Rebecca, in my regards before I point the finger I need to clean up my own backyard:) anger it's a very bad sin.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an amusing piece. It looks to me as though you are not hampered by any length restrictions, so you could perhaps also add a line on misuse of the cut button, going too far and losing without trace invaluable text.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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This is an amusing piece. It looks to me as though you are not hampered by any length restrictions, so you could perhaps also add a line on misuse of the cut button, going too far and losing without trace invaluable text.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you I will revise and see what I can do:)
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hi Iza!
Man, that's too true. Sad, but too true.
an identical copy...of our previous life. >> space before and after the ellipse if it's inside a sentence. No space if it's at the end, like you're trailing off. And, while I don't believe in previous lives, I do believe that we too often do this with a previous day. Habits are easy to form and hard to break.
Thanks for a cool read!
Be blessed,
Deb
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Hi Iza!
Man, that's too true. Sad, but too true.
an identical copy...of our previous life. >> space before and after the ellipse if it's inside a sentence. No space if it's at the end, like you're trailing off. And, while I don't believe in previous lives, I do believe that we too often do this with a previous day. Habits are easy to form and hard to break.
Thanks for a cool read!
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from lyenochka
I'm not sure I really understood the last statement. I guess you are saying that because we are so stuck in our habits, the devil (you don't have to capitalize) can't tempt us? I liked your use of keyboarding shortcuts as life metaphors.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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I'm not sure I really understood the last statement. I guess you are saying that because we are so stuck in our habits, the devil (you don't have to capitalize) can't tempt us? I liked your use of keyboarding shortcuts as life metaphors.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much my dear friend:) How are you ?
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Quite the idea of copying or pasting a life that is full of mistakes. The Devil does evidently work overtime if we let him in. But I have come to realize that he needs to be out of the story or picture that we are writing or painting.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Quite the idea of copying or pasting a life that is full of mistakes. The Devil does evidently work overtime if we let him in. But I have come to realize that he needs to be out of the story or picture that we are writing or painting.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Rosemary, we try to keep that old cheap out of our business but he comes uninvited.
