Spinning !
Political Senryu3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Spinning, has the proper 5-7-5 formatting and brings the world of politics into its proper perspective. It is a whirlwind of tricks designed to either fool you, distract you, or downright bull shit you.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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This senryu, Spinning, has the proper 5-7-5 formatting and brings the world of politics into its proper perspective. It is a whirlwind of tricks designed to either fool you, distract you, or downright bull shit you.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That are never kept except in some twisted interpretation... A great offering for the poli-senryu today - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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That are never kept except in some twisted interpretation... A great offering for the poli-senryu today - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the tapestry image,
and the words that go with it.
-You also have a good topic
and message.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-I like the tapestry image,
and the words that go with it.
-You also have a good topic
and message.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Great review zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya.
