Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Great chapter full of excitement and the never ending captivity. This taste of Sins of Chaos leaves me wanting to read more. I think i will buy this book! ð???ð???

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020

Thanks cdefan :)

Glad you enjoyed another chapter, and thanks for your support! I hope you do buy the book. That would mean a great deal to me. Stay tuned my friend!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Sorry, I'm late getting your review done. My computer died a couple of days ago and I just got it back. Your story was great and I enjoyed the read. Your descriptions let my minds eye see a wonderful picture. I didn't find any mistakes. Wonderful job. Have a great day. Shirley

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020

Thank you, Shirley :)

I appreciate you taking the time to read my chapter. Happy to hear you enjoyed. My naughty trio was fun to create. They seem to be causing trouble with the human kind and the Breedline.

Thanks again & have a wonderful weekend!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I like this trip back to when the dangerous trio were called and spared by God. They sure were dangerous. I don't think anyone describes here characters from either side of the fence as well as you do Shana. One can almost see them in the flesh, as it were. Beautifully written my friend. It sounds like they are on the hunt again. Well done, as usual a brilliant episode, well done my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020

Awww... thanks Roy! :)

Your review and kind words made my day! Yesterday I came home to a flooded house. The hose to my toilet came apart and flooded almost my entire floors. Taking the day off to file insurance and deal with getting everything dry. Well... I guess this means I get new floors. Say some prayers for me.
Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 03-Jun-2020

Sorry Shana, wow. Of course I?ll pray

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Fantastic chapter Ms. Shana! The artwork is eye catching too!
The trio seems to be bad to the bone, especially the Apollyon guy. I would hate to run into him in a dark alley and his sisters. The Breedline better gather their forces. Looks like they have a hand full here.

Looking forward to reading more chapters.

Nate

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020

Thank you, Nate :)

Glad you enjoyed a look back into the fourth book. I have went over the entire book and re-edited and now just waiting for my editor to do his magic. This one will have a new cover too.

Thanks so much!
Shana :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello scongrove.
I will tell you I did like your way of writing. Why good question, you have the ability to keep me on reading of a made up chacters who are an eye opener, especially Callisto and oh yes, Apollyon.
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020

Awww... thanks so much, Gert :)

Your words are so encouraging and made me smile real big. I'm so glad you find my writing entertaining. That's what I like to hear. You are awesome! I had a bad day yesterday, and your review made it better.

Thanks again,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Jun-2020

You are welcome scongrove
Gert

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

This is a great beginning to a promising story. The chapter is well-written, interesting. Your description is perfect and your characters really come to life. I look forward to reading more. Finding out more about their powers, their mission.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Since I'm going back and re-editing, this one was fun to make a few touches to get the story going. I do enjoy my naughty trio. They are so much fun to write about. I'm glad you enjoyed. You put a smile on my face today.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You really seem to get to the core of your characters in your describing both their looks and their personalities. This not only in your main characters, but your secondary one's, as well. I like the set up at the end. Also, great pics.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my naughty trio. They are definitely fun to write about, especially Apollyon. I hope I can get back to writing my new book as soon as I go over Unleashed Chaos. I have 16 more chapters to fine tune. I will also have new covers for all my books except for The Immortal. My old publisher is stealing my royalties. That's why I redoing all my books and republishing in Amazon.

I appreciate all your support and inspiring words.
Stay safe & big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 03-Jun-2020

Sorry to hear about what your old publisher has done. Best wishes with your new one and with your rewrites.
Hugs,
Faye