There's A Storm A'Coming
Are you awake yet...12 total reviews
Comment from Bar62
We both basically reach the same conclusion, however, we come from
We the people have been driven like sheep, for so many years, to a point of near irreparable division. This country, in its current state, is not what our founders fought for; nor anyone since who has ever served or still serves to protect us. We are one people. sides of the street. To be honest I just don't get off on military references, either by way of text or with photos/pictures. I'm curious as to exactly you consider the Satanic legions are comprised of? You see I am pretty well convinced that Donald Trump if not the #1 Bad Guy (the devil himself,) is
ay up in the chain of commands. Perhaps he is the anti-christ, or Bellial,
I did like this part of your writing;
We the people have been driven like sheep, for so many years, to a point of near irreparable division. This country, in its current state, is not what our founders fought for; nor anyone since who has ever served or still serves to protect us. We are one people. I'm not sure about being one people, I see us as pretty damned divided. i agree with your definition of our current state of being!
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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We both basically reach the same conclusion, however, we come from
We the people have been driven like sheep, for so many years, to a point of near irreparable division. This country, in its current state, is not what our founders fought for; nor anyone since who has ever served or still serves to protect us. We are one people. sides of the street. To be honest I just don't get off on military references, either by way of text or with photos/pictures. I'm curious as to exactly you consider the Satanic legions are comprised of? You see I am pretty well convinced that Donald Trump if not the #1 Bad Guy (the devil himself,) is
ay up in the chain of commands. Perhaps he is the anti-christ, or Bellial,
I did like this part of your writing;
We the people have been driven like sheep, for so many years, to a point of near irreparable division. This country, in its current state, is not what our founders fought for; nor anyone since who has ever served or still serves to protect us. We are one people. I'm not sure about being one people, I see us as pretty damned divided. i agree with your definition of our current state of being!
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking time to review my work. As I do not agree about your views on Trump, I cannot comment. Eventually, many things are going to surface about Hillary/Bill, Obama and many more. To me, names noted on the Jeffrey Epstein's flight list to his pedo island speaks volumes on satanic activity. Bill Clinton is one of them. So in my opinion, and mine alone, the least of the evils is better than the worst of them. Appreciate your time today.
Comment from Sumpta
All will be well dear writer. I understand how you feel at this point but believe the sun will still shine someday. Truly, we have a beautiful generation behind us and things will turn out for good for them.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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All will be well dear writer. I understand how you feel at this point but believe the sun will still shine someday. Truly, we have a beautiful generation behind us and things will turn out for good for them.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Yes, we the people are one! We just need to get back to remembering that. We have been divided by such evil in our midst. Praying change for all is a'coming! :) Appreciate your kind words and shiny stars!! xo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Commentary and Philosophy Non-Fiction having captivating flow from the beginning to the end, beautifully linking the US's Past to its Present, and also emitting positive waves through the last two paragraphs.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"We have a beautiful generation of people behind us. We must take back our liberties for their sake."
Laudable Attempt!
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Commentary and Philosophy Non-Fiction having captivating flow from the beginning to the end, beautifully linking the US's Past to its Present, and also emitting positive waves through the last two paragraphs.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"We have a beautiful generation of people behind us. We must take back our liberties for their sake."
Laudable Attempt!
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate you took time to read and offer this wonderful comment and shiny stars!! xo
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Mystery Author. We the People will take back what has been taken from us. You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it and agree with you. It is well-organized and makes many valid and true points. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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You are right, Mystery Author. We the People will take back what has been taken from us. You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it and agree with you. It is well-organized and makes many valid and true points. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much! Much is being revealed and God wins! :). Appreciate your kind words and stars. xo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. This is a superb essay regarding the state of America and our future. I commend your thinking and expression. The sadness is, many are sleeping. Patriotism is anathema to progressivism in America. In their minds, a Patriot is the worst thing anyone can be.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer. This is a superb essay regarding the state of America and our future. I commend your thinking and expression. The sadness is, many are sleeping. Patriotism is anathema to progressivism in America. In their minds, a Patriot is the worst thing anyone can be.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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So true, but press on we must! We cannot lose! God wins! Thank you so much for your touching comment! xo
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You're welcome
Comment from estory
I think you speak for a lot of worried people right now as the country descends into chaos. Yes, the storm is here. And yes, we need to turn back to God. Only Jesus will solve these unsolvable problems we are bringing on ourselves. Come Lord Jesus! estory
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I think you speak for a lot of worried people right now as the country descends into chaos. Yes, the storm is here. And yes, we need to turn back to God. Only Jesus will solve these unsolvable problems we are bringing on ourselves. Come Lord Jesus! estory
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Indeed. it?s not political - it?s Biblical truly. Appreciate your time and kind words! xo
Comment from Sally Law
Outstanding call to action, prayer and fortitude, mystery writer. This is refreshly true. I was just praying and the words" we hold these truth to be self-evident," ring in my ears. What our founding fathers set aside for us, remains to be a great gift. Fools have wasted these freedoms and liberties; taking them for granted, and destroyed them by electing evil officials. Jesus said, hold fast until I come." I believe Jesus's coming is at hand, but we must never give up ground to the enemies of life and liberty.
Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous piece along six stars. Superb!!
Sally Law xoxoxoxo!!!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Outstanding call to action, prayer and fortitude, mystery writer. This is refreshly true. I was just praying and the words" we hold these truth to be self-evident," ring in my ears. What our founding fathers set aside for us, remains to be a great gift. Fools have wasted these freedoms and liberties; taking them for granted, and destroyed them by electing evil officials. Jesus said, hold fast until I come." I believe Jesus's coming is at hand, but we must never give up ground to the enemies of life and liberty.
Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous piece along six stars. Superb!!
Sally Law xoxoxoxo!!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Yo Momna Bear! Thanks Sally-O my friend! We need to bring back a sense of country and pride and God at the Helm! Appreciate your loving words and super-duper shining brightly stars!! xo
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You are dearly missed by me and by this site. Thanks again for standing tall!
Love,
Sal xoxo xoxo......
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent! You have spoken a nice story about the Americans, and their courage, conviction and they know how to share ideas for betterment of the people; well said, well done; I have enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you Best of luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
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There Is A Storm AComing
our founders fought for nor anyone since that serves to protect us
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Excellent! You have spoken a nice story about the Americans, and their courage, conviction and they know how to share ideas for betterment of the people; well said, well done; I have enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you Best of luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Typo / inexpressiveness:
There Is A Storm AComing
our founders fought for nor anyone since that serves to protect us
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking time to really check my work. I have revised a bit because if your guidance! Greatly appreciated! xo
Comment from Moon baby
Worthy of ten stars, but all I have is five! Your work is beautifully said (written) and I support every word. You are what America needs to get back to. Our political arena seems to have forgotten what they are supposed to be doing- looking out for the people of this land- together. Finding solutions together, not against each other. We are one nation under God and if more of us would only stop and remember that, maybe more would want what's best for our nation and the world and do the right thing, like be good to one another! Thank you for this fine work of art.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Worthy of ten stars, but all I have is five! Your work is beautifully said (written) and I support every word. You are what America needs to get back to. Our political arena seems to have forgotten what they are supposed to be doing- looking out for the people of this land- together. Finding solutions together, not against each other. We are one nation under God and if more of us would only stop and remember that, maybe more would want what's best for our nation and the world and do the right thing, like be good to one another! Thank you for this fine work of art.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I am honored that you even stopped to read! My goal is to move hearts! The greatest gift is your appreciation of the piece, and I truly feel it touched you! Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The country used to be something very special, sacred even. Nowadays it's a hot commodity bargained for power, fame, and influence. The one's in charge are starting small fires to bring chaos and tyranny. I do wonder if this is the end?
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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The country used to be something very special, sacred even. Nowadays it's a hot commodity bargained for power, fame, and influence. The one's in charge are starting small fires to bring chaos and tyranny. I do wonder if this is the end?
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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We will be special again, wait and see! We have Fed reserve under the People?s control not the world satanic elite. And many behind scenes have been cleaned out. Evil is being forced up and out into the Public eye. Thank you so much for taking time to read this piece! xo
