Happy Man rules
Happiness comes from proper preparation24 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
That will be the most fulfilling desire in our lives if we could live by these simple rules:
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Choose your friends wisely, don't hold grudges,
anything worth having doesn't come easy... when one fudges.
Don't be jealous of success, let others be judges,
to live a happy life, with less strife, no begrudges."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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That will be the most fulfilling desire in our lives if we could live by these simple rules:
"
Choose your friends wisely, don't hold grudges,
anything worth having doesn't come easy... when one fudges.
Don't be jealous of success, let others be judges,
to live a happy life, with less strife, no begrudges."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Iza, you go it! Now live life like it is meant to be lived...
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Nice entry for the contest, a rhymed poem of at least 3 stanzas about what makes you happy. You came with a (considerably) modified quatrain, with in each stanza one rhyming end-sound in each line.
Interesting, and it worked well for me to see what makes a man happy.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Nice entry for the contest, a rhymed poem of at least 3 stanzas about what makes you happy. You came with a (considerably) modified quatrain, with in each stanza one rhyming end-sound in each line.
Interesting, and it worked well for me to see what makes a man happy.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Marjon, Please know how much I do value this six-star validation! Thank you!
I enjoyed stretching the quatrain with this. Have a great week!
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You are welcome!
Comment from Mary Furlong
How clever is this! I love, love, love it. You are my kind of poet.
Did you invent this format? If so, congratulations. Good luck with the contest
Have I mentioned that I love the poem?
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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How clever is this! I love, love, love it. You are my kind of poet.
Did you invent this format? If so, congratulations. Good luck with the contest
Have I mentioned that I love the poem?
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Yes, I like to stretch the poetic styles to see what can be experienced for the writer and the reader
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think you had some really good ideas and describe happiness very well. I found it a little confusing the way ideas seemed to repeat themselves, or the words did, for example repeating "for granted'
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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I think you had some really good ideas and describe happiness very well. I found it a little confusing the way ideas seemed to repeat themselves, or the words did, for example repeating "for granted'
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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You are correct, it does not work, so I changed it! Thanks, it helps to have your honest feedback. Have a spectacular week!
