Happy Man rules
Happiness comes from proper preparation24 total reviews
Comment from Elon Vaughn
Nice job with the format and good message for me. I tend to hold grudges...going all the way back to the bus line in grade school. I know I should forgive and that some of my grudges are trivial. They seemed like big deals at the time.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Nice job with the format and good message for me. I tend to hold grudges...going all the way back to the bus line in grade school. I know I should forgive and that some of my grudges are trivial. They seemed like big deals at the time.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Elon, we all suffered what seemed at the time insufferable wrongs, the process of developing 2" thick skin takes time.
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Thank you.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray all is well with you during this pandemic. This is a lovely poem on proper preparation to be happy. You met the format of the poem's requirement. I really like your rhyming of the end words. I like how you gave the ways to make someone happy, 1) never take someone for granted, 2) find a good wife (bingo), 3) believe in yourself, and so much more. This is a great line, "put your heart and soul into everything you do!" This is a wonderful written poem. Well-done. Very creative! Love the photo. Thanks. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Hello,
I pray all is well with you during this pandemic. This is a lovely poem on proper preparation to be happy. You met the format of the poem's requirement. I really like your rhyming of the end words. I like how you gave the ways to make someone happy, 1) never take someone for granted, 2) find a good wife (bingo), 3) believe in yourself, and so much more. This is a great line, "put your heart and soul into everything you do!" This is a wonderful written poem. Well-done. Very creative! Love the photo. Thanks. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Joyce, I do thank you for this wonderful six-star review. Your comments are very humbling, thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, this certainly is a happy poem. I had to smile at your use of 'boo-hoo.' That added just the right touch of whimsy to this delightful poem. And your advice is very sound. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Well, this certainly is a happy poem. I had to smile at your use of 'boo-hoo.' That added just the right touch of whimsy to this delightful poem. And your advice is very sound. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Lou, thanks and a happy day smile back to you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your exuberant, vividly descriptive and creative poem give some excellent advice for living life to the fullest. Yes, happiness is "planted," grudges are
joy killers, and never EVER take love for granted.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Your exuberant, vividly descriptive and creative poem give some excellent advice for living life to the fullest. Yes, happiness is "planted," grudges are
joy killers, and never EVER take love for granted.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Oh and yes, never, ever take love for granted. Ugh!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was a good enough poem. It read as a free verse, even if it did have a sort of faint rhyme scheme. I like to see poems with positive messages to them, and this did have that.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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This was a good enough poem. It read as a free verse, even if it did have a sort of faint rhyme scheme. I like to see poems with positive messages to them, and this did have that.
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Amanda, thank you.
Comment from ameen786
Put your heart and soul into everything that you do-that's wonderful advice; enjoyed your beautiful poem in meaningful verses and excellent rhymes with a great message; good luck
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Put your heart and soul into everything that you do-that's wonderful advice; enjoyed your beautiful poem in meaningful verses and excellent rhymes with a great message; good luck
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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ameen thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt monorhyme poem about happy men will rule each day no matter what challenges we have to face our happy attitude will carry us safely through the day as on angel wings.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt monorhyme poem about happy men will rule each day no matter what challenges we have to face our happy attitude will carry us safely through the day as on angel wings.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much Sandra.
Comment from Tim Noble
Brilliant rhyming life rules. I couldn't have put it better myself even if I tried. I would love to say that I had written a poem as good as this.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Brilliant rhyming life rules. I couldn't have put it better myself even if I tried. I would love to say that I had written a poem as good as this.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for this honor of a six-star review! I am pleased you liked this.
Comment from poetwatch
How true you pen, but understand that life is a walk in strife where what one plans become unravel at the end. How happy we would be if life would let us be what we were meant to be. Very good entry for What Makes Me Happy. :)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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How true you pen, but understand that life is a walk in strife where what one plans become unravel at the end. How happy we would be if life would let us be what we were meant to be. Very good entry for What Makes Me Happy. :)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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poetwatch, yes we simply put one foot in front of the other and take life as it comes.
Comment from royowen
I think one of the best thing to remember is never to judge people, be kind, and live a life of sober habits. Forgive others, and a great thing to do is choose friends wisely, we'll done, this is a superb entry in this contest, you've done a marvellous job. Written in aabb hexametric stanzas, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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I think one of the best thing to remember is never to judge people, be kind, and live a life of sober habits. Forgive others, and a great thing to do is choose friends wisely, we'll done, this is a superb entry in this contest, you've done a marvellous job. Written in aabb hexametric stanzas, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you I appreciate the warm comments,
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Well done
