The Grumpy Owl
5-7-5 Witty Animal6 total reviews
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Too funny! Had me LMAO. Great pun, wonderful illustration to accompany it. You did a great job with this entry. Stay safe & healthy during these interesting times.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Too funny! Had me LMAO. Great pun, wonderful illustration to accompany it. You did a great job with this entry. Stay safe & healthy during these interesting times.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for this terrific review! I hope your ass has recovered.
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LOL!
Comment from pome lover
that is funny! and very clever, too! it made me laugh.
congratulations on winning first place.
I love a clever sense of humor.
good job.
Katharine - pome lover
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that is funny! and very clever, too! it made me laugh.
congratulations on winning first place.
I love a clever sense of humor.
good job.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is full of punnery. It is fun. The 2nd line took me a second to get. I would suspect this condition might cause moodiness and irritability. There is great play on words. We almost need a drum roll and clash of symbols. "Padum pum ch"
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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This is full of punnery. It is fun. The 2nd line took me a second to get. I would suspect this condition might cause moodiness and irritability. There is great play on words. We almost need a drum roll and clash of symbols. "Padum pum ch"
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. Can you explain to me "Padum pum ch" please?
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It's the drum & cymbals after a comedic pun line or joke
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Thanks!
Comment from DeboraDyess
Very nice, Mr. Owl. :) Love the rhyme -- an added bonus for those of us reading. This is an excellent contest entry! And I love the owl picture. you chose. Well done!
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Very nice, Mr. Owl. :) Love the rhyme -- an added bonus for those of us reading. This is an excellent contest entry! And I love the owl picture. you chose. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I find you have written a witty animal, a wise owl, that does not give a hoot, in this 5-7-5 poem; well said, well done; I have enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you Best of luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
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I find you have written a witty animal, a wise owl, that does not give a hoot, in this 5-7-5 poem; well said, well done; I have enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you Best of luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, a very clever play on a well-known malady. Plus, an arresting image to go with it. I wish you the best of luck at the polls. Big brother wants me to write more.
Peace, Lee
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Ah, a very clever play on a well-known malady. Plus, an arresting image to go with it. I wish you the best of luck at the polls. Big brother wants me to write more.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
