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"Written with All My Heart"

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Heartfelt Poetry

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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what a wonderful thing to meet someone and communicate in the 'texting' world! ;) I would only suggest perhaps 'breaking' that long line there at the end... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    She stood me up in Philadelphia two nights ago has about $300 of my money so it's not such a good experience anymore but thanks for reviewing!
    Ricky
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Definitely a well thought out and very well written. Love the interaction of each actor who seems to be showing off their talents. Don't you trust me?

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
    Pleaseand thanks for reviewing but she turned out to be a fluke I may have made a wasted trip today nights ago and meet her in Philadelphia she never left from West Virginia and stole about $300 of my money.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Melodie Michelle on 11-Jun-2020
    Wow! You did well explaining yourself;-)