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Futuristic

2 line poetry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written two-line essence poem about artificial intelligence that only pretend that they can run the world and everything on earth without any human help.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
Excellent
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I did like this pithy, little poem. It is an excellent contest entry. I am not sure about the word "lonely," however, because it suggests a sadness which I think is not intended.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much,
    Hugs,Trisha