Mountains in Autumn
Breathe.....15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The artwork is breathtaking,
and the presentation highlights it well.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The seasonal imagery is good,
and you show the vibrancy
and beauty of the season.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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-The artwork is breathtaking,
and the presentation highlights it well.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The seasonal imagery is good,
and you show the vibrancy
and beauty of the season.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a good night!
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You are very welcome, and you do the same!
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Harmony13,
I hope you are well during this pandemic, and the chaos in the world. I like your 5-7-5 about the mountains in the autumn. I love your artwork of the lovely red barn. So true, there are so many beautiful colors of the mountains, trees and overall landscape especially in Autumn. The views are breathtaking. Nicely done, Harmony!!! And very creative poem. Thank you. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Hello Harmony13,
I hope you are well during this pandemic, and the chaos in the world. I like your 5-7-5 about the mountains in the autumn. I love your artwork of the lovely red barn. So true, there are so many beautiful colors of the mountains, trees and overall landscape especially in Autumn. The views are breathtaking. Nicely done, Harmony!!! And very creative poem. Thank you. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely comments. I am well, thank you. Have a good night!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you are so right with your short yet vivid observations, my lady!! ;) Such a beautiful 5-7-5 offering for the contest - best of luck to you!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Oh, you are so right with your short yet vivid observations, my lady!! ;) Such a beautiful 5-7-5 offering for the contest - best of luck to you!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a good night!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
The scents of autumn do seem to take on colors. This 5-7-5 poem celebrates the turning of leaves in the mountains, the first place where these colors appear. Well done! :) Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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The scents of autumn do seem to take on colors. This 5-7-5 poem celebrates the turning of leaves in the mountains, the first place where these colors appear. Well done! :) Nancy
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Autumn colours are always very pleasing and I love orange and all the shades in between, you brought the colour to my eyes here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Autumn colours are always very pleasing and I love orange and all the shades in between, you brought the colour to my eyes here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!....Maria
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Mountains in Autumn
by harmony13
Hello, Harmony,
What a beautiful haiku about Autumn. Great imagery and presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Mountains in Autumn
by harmony13
Hello, Harmony,
What a beautiful haiku about Autumn. Great imagery and presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive piece about MY favorite time of the year--the weeks of fall when the trees are a color riot!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive piece about MY favorite time of the year--the weeks of fall when the trees are a color riot!
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!....Maria
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for selecting the artwork with its "breathtaking" colors to intensify your 5-7-5 about "Mountains in Autumn". Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you for selecting the artwork with its "breathtaking" colors to intensify your 5-7-5 about "Mountains in Autumn". Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about Autumn in the mountains where everything is covered in hues of orange and gold that is awesome to see and take our breath away.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about Autumn in the mountains where everything is covered in hues of orange and gold that is awesome to see and take our breath away.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment from Sugarray77
I really liked your entry for the 5-7-5 Maria... your use of color in background, artwork and font add enhancement to this short piece. The format is crafted perfectly with all the right placements and part... love the satori line. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I really liked your entry for the 5-7-5 Maria... your use of color in background, artwork and font add enhancement to this short piece. The format is crafted perfectly with all the right placements and part... love the satori line. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
