Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Soothing Wind, has the right set up and surrounds someone with the gossamer feeling of both breeze and silken pleasure.

 Comment Written 30-May-2020

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reply by the author on 30-May-2020

Thanks for the read and review. I like the gossamer and silken both convey to soft light pleasure.

Comment from Peter Henrich

Excellent

I like this poem a lot. The first two lines evoke physical sensations and the third shows how her being soothed physically affects her emotions.

Nicely done.
-Peter

 Comment Written 29-May-2020

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reply by the author on 29-May-2020

Thanks for your review and comments. I changed the last line to read "calming fears."

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Summer breeze (air) blow as soothing wind to calm heart; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-May-2020

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reply by the author on 29-May-2020

Thanks for your review and comments. I changed the last line to read "calming fears."