Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Very true and we can't control the weather and these natural phenomena's can cause havoc, kill and maim and cripple the economy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-May-2020

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reply by the author on 29-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Peter Henrich

Excellent

Very good :) I laughed out loud when reading the final line.

I'm curious whether the inspiration for the poem cake from distant observation or living it first hand.

The photo is a good fit as is the color scheme.

Nice poem.

-Peter

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 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Thanks for your review Peter. The inspiration actually came from the many cyclones that happen in my part of the world, one in particular that destroyed an entire city.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt.
This short piece tells a clear story and is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 28-May-2020

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reply by the author on 28-May-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.