Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

I have seen the massive destruction that strong winds cause to those in their paths.

This is a good entry for the 3-7-5 writing contests. Good luck.

 Comment Written 30-May-2020

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Comment from Elon Vaughn

Excellent

Held the 3-5-3 format. Illustration is suitable for the poem and the poem clearly makes a strong point. No suggestions for improvement. Difficult to say more about a short piece.

 Comment Written 30-May-2020

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reply by Elon Vaughn on 31-May-2020

Welcome

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Comment from Sumpta

Excellent

Lovely one. A good and matching image to go with the poem. I love the way the image explains the force that comes with the air. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-May-2020

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Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I am left feeling lucky that I live in the country where we have had large wind but just the description of trees. The more things that are close together the more damage that can be done.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Nice entry for the 3/5/3 air poem writing prompt contest. I love the presentation. Good syllable count. The lines connect grammatically. Well done.

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Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Deadly Winds, has the right set up and reminds the readers that some wind is great for kites but bad for home values.

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the deadly winds like cyclones, tornados, and hurricanes that bring chaos and devastation to cities on a very big unbelievable scale.

 Comment Written 29-May-2020

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Deadly Winds, a 3-5-3 Air Poem Contest Entry, the poem speaks how cyclonic sudden strong rush of winds cause large cities to smash; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR

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Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this poem for the air contest. You use rhyme and consonance to bring it more alive for the reader. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a reminder of the negative impact on our human lives, especially in our human structure of cities, of a surfeit of air i.e major weather events 'large cities/..go bust '

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