Foul mouth
3/5/3 poem4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Foul Mouth, has the right set up and suggests that the President's words are better seen swirling in the local toilet
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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This 3-5-3, Foul Mouth, has the right set up and suggests that the President's words are better seen swirling in the local toilet
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Hi Bill, I appreciate your time and the thoughtful review; thank you and be safe.
Comment from Joan E.
What an imaginative and graphic poem! Unfortunately, it is so true and also should go viral as social commentary. It is still hard to believe you were able to say so much in so few syllables. Best wishes in the 3-5-3 contest and still chortling- Joan
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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What an imaginative and graphic poem! Unfortunately, it is so true and also should go viral as social commentary. It is still hard to believe you were able to say so much in so few syllables. Best wishes in the 3-5-3 contest and still chortling- Joan
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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So pleased to read your wonderful and encouraging comments my friend; happy you like the write; I am always grateful to you; thank you very much.
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I am glad I caught this post since it was for a blind contest. Even Twitter is offended by his oral diarrhea! Sighs- Joan
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Oral diarrhea, I like that, you mind if I use it in my writing? I'll give you credit.
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Feel free--credit or not. You certainly got me thinking! Have a relaxing weekend- Joan
Comment from Diana Kane
There are some strict parameters to this style. You definitely get your point across well within those parameters. I think this is great. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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There are some strict parameters to this style. You definitely get your point across well within those parameters. I think this is great. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Hello Diane, I appreciate your time and the thoughtfull review; thank you.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was definitely a creative take on the prompt. Not sure others will agree, but I see nothing to improve here. I think you at least tried to make it funny. I appreciate that.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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This was definitely a creative take on the prompt. Not sure others will agree, but I see nothing to improve here. I think you at least tried to make it funny. I appreciate that.
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Hi Amanda, I appreciate your time; you stated that you see nothing to improve in the poem, then can you please explain why the 4-star rating? Thank you.
