"Written with All My Heart"
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Comment from tfawcus
The expression 'Cellophane wrapped screams' is a graphic one, particularly in regard to COVID-19, which leaves its victims gasping for breath.
You have a spelling slip in the line, ''Its all a matter of perseption (perception)", but that's easily corrected.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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The expression 'Cellophane wrapped screams' is a graphic one, particularly in regard to COVID-19, which leaves its victims gasping for breath.
You have a spelling slip in the line, ''Its all a matter of perseption (perception)", but that's easily corrected.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Nearest recycle really hard from above really deep in my heart with that pain that's everybody suffering.
Thanks tfawcus.
Ricky
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I get your sentiments. This was fine. Nothing wrong with this other than one thing, but it was just a typo. I'm telling you so you can fix it if you want. You accidentally left the second O out of 'coronavirus.'
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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I get your sentiments. This was fine. Nothing wrong with this other than one thing, but it was just a typo. I'm telling you so you can fix it if you want. You accidentally left the second O out of 'coronavirus.'
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Well thank you thank you very much for your fine reviewing time
Doctor Ricky 1024
