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Fixation on the Situation

Sensation of obstruction causing limitation and perturbation

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Comment from kiwisteveh
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This is one of the best of these I've seen - I enjoyed the humour created by the triple rhyme, especially using longer words. Very clever.

Perhaps you could be like the constipated mathematician and work it out with a pencil?

Steve

 Comment Written 28-May-2020


reply by the author on 28-May-2020
    Thanks for your comments Steve.
    Would that mathematician use a propelling pencil, a 2B or a 6B? I hope he washed it afterwards.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and we sometimes have that mental block that prevents the brain from forming words, I can only write poetry in the morning, my brain fails by the afternoon, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-May-2020


reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    I imagine you wearing that super sonnet bonnet all day!