Change Comes Through Compromise
a 1-6-115 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The
last puts it all together. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you are having a great day!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The
last puts it all together. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you are having a great day!
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thanks, Harmony
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An important message here and we all have a duty to vote and I have instilled that in my children and the always vote, women especially fought hard for the vote so we must always use it, otherwise we have no opinion and can't complain if we didn't take part, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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An important message here and we all have a duty to vote and I have instilled that in my children and the always vote, women especially fought hard for the vote so we must always use it, otherwise we have no opinion and can't complain if we didn't take part, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Elon Vaughn
Good job on the restrictive format and so true a comment that everyone should follow. Particularly relevant during these most unusual political times.
I have a cousin running for a judicial post and it all has to be done with no personal contact. So strange.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Good job on the restrictive format and so true a comment that everyone should follow. Particularly relevant during these most unusual political times.
I have a cousin running for a judicial post and it all has to be done with no personal contact. So strange.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks, Elon
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Welcome.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I really like this. I think it's good advice, and it's a really good 1-6-1 poem. You have done incredibly well, and I'll hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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I really like this. I think it's good advice, and it's a really good 1-6-1 poem. You have done incredibly well, and I'll hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
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Thank you, Amanda
Comment from Drew Delaney
I like this. Everyone needs to vote. That is what makes democracy what it is. In some countries, the people do not have the privilege. A well thought out poem.
Drew
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I like this. Everyone needs to vote. That is what makes democracy what it is. In some countries, the people do not have the privilege. A well thought out poem.
Drew
Comment Written 27-May-2020
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Thank you, Drew
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Very good. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Very good. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks, Raul
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Change Comes Through Compromise
Hello my friend
Nice presentation and entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 contest. Good syllable count. The lines don't rhyme.
Pause (doesn't rhyme)
and vote, despite the law's
flaws
All three lines have to rhyme.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Change Comes Through Compromise
Hello my friend
Nice presentation and entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 contest. Good syllable count. The lines don't rhyme.
Pause (doesn't rhyme)
and vote, despite the law's
flaws
All three lines have to rhyme.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Pause is pronounced PAWS where I?m from. Happy day : )
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The governments of each country seem to have too much power in their hands to control the people who are paying their salaries and to force them to do things that are not good for them.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The governments of each country seem to have too much power in their hands to control the people who are paying their salaries and to force them to do things that are not good for them.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a clear message which is deep and relatable. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a clear message which is deep and relatable. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks, Oliver
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
For only a few words, you've captured the mood and thought of many political movements, and the delight in how a vote is a change for change, with the frustration that others aren't thinking and bothering. So many angles, but a very clear message. I like it. Your photo obviously takes it in a certain direction, but I think many protest movements from history could have worked, too.
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For only a few words, you've captured the mood and thought of many political movements, and the delight in how a vote is a change for change, with the frustration that others aren't thinking and bothering. So many angles, but a very clear message. I like it. Your photo obviously takes it in a certain direction, but I think many protest movements from history could have worked, too.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks, TBW, for the great review.
