Pisa
The love of an angel11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I love cats and I can tell from this story you do too, and you are also very much in tune with a spiritual connection to Pisa so you can find the boys, Leo and Dinu.
A couple of corrections:
Absent (Absently,) I am shaking my favourite Jamaican beach globe and lost in thoughts I remember.
On that time (At that time), I thought that this is what it takes
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I love cats and I can tell from this story you do too, and you are also very much in tune with a spiritual connection to Pisa so you can find the boys, Leo and Dinu.
A couple of corrections:
Absent (Absently,) I am shaking my favourite Jamaican beach globe and lost in thoughts I remember.
On that time (At that time), I thought that this is what it takes
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Hi LisaMay:) thank you so much for taking the time to review my little story. Your grammar corrections are greatly appreciated:)
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Pisa, is a heart-warming story of a loving person and her adoring cat. Life gives and takes away so it is natural to lose a cat. So nice to have suitable ones to follow.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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This story, Pisa, is a heart-warming story of a loving person and her adoring cat. Life gives and takes away so it is natural to lose a cat. So nice to have suitable ones to follow.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing about your lovely Pisa, who apparently still talks to you from Heaven. God gave us animals for our health and a part of us wants to be like Adam and Eve living closely and in harmony with the animals.
" was looking at {a} post"
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing about your lovely Pisa, who apparently still talks to you from Heaven. God gave us animals for our health and a part of us wants to be like Adam and Eve living closely and in harmony with the animals.
" was looking at {a} post"
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from DeboraDyess
OH, they steal our hearts away, don't they. OUr kitties are such a part of our family. And we have three kittens right now -- we were ablt to keep our girl inside during her 'time', but one of our boys slipped inside, too and ... kittens! She's fixed now, and the kittens are 5 weeks old. In another week, we'll be looking for good homes for them. I'll miss them!
This is a special glimpse of Heaven, indeed. :) Such a different twist! I enjoyed the read.
Just look and make sure all your tenses are the same (past or present).
Great tale and great contest entry!
Deb
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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OH, they steal our hearts away, don't they. OUr kitties are such a part of our family. And we have three kittens right now -- we were ablt to keep our girl inside during her 'time', but one of our boys slipped inside, too and ... kittens! She's fixed now, and the kittens are 5 weeks old. In another week, we'll be looking for good homes for them. I'll miss them!
This is a special glimpse of Heaven, indeed. :) Such a different twist! I enjoyed the read.
Just look and make sure all your tenses are the same (past or present).
Great tale and great contest entry!
Deb
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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You are so right, when I was in Romania our cat used to have lots of babies, but unfortunately not all of them lived. I love cats I find them very smart and warm.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a heartfelt story about the love of your kitties. I enjoyed reading it. Your collage is beautiful. I like the way you expressed your dream. Your description was great. I love that the kitties 'found you' as Pisa said. Perhaps your title is missing the word 'of in the description box'--For love (of) an angel. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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What a heartfelt story about the love of your kitties. I enjoyed reading it. Your collage is beautiful. I like the way you expressed your dream. Your description was great. I love that the kitties 'found you' as Pisa said. Perhaps your title is missing the word 'of in the description box'--For love (of) an angel. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the correction, silly me I must been hungry so I eat the of from the description:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Loved your take on this contest, Iza, as it gives folks something to positively focus on in this presence!! ;) Thanx for sharing that, my lady, and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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LOL!! Loved your take on this contest, Iza, as it gives folks something to positively focus on in this presence!! ;) Thanx for sharing that, my lady, and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from estory
Nice essay in this continuing series on the epidemic, and how pets can soothe our nerves and calm our mood, give us something to hold on to, to exchange affection in a world of social distancing and contactless relationships. The cat here is an image of an angel, and you created this great mysterious vibe of the cat appearing as almost messenger angel, to tell you new kittens are coming into your life. So it appears as if it is from providence. It's a little unclear in the writing what or who Pisa is in the opening of it, I know you have that picture posted but it is a good idea to set that out in the essay itself to clarify the subject. estory
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Nice essay in this continuing series on the epidemic, and how pets can soothe our nerves and calm our mood, give us something to hold on to, to exchange affection in a world of social distancing and contactless relationships. The cat here is an image of an angel, and you created this great mysterious vibe of the cat appearing as almost messenger angel, to tell you new kittens are coming into your life. So it appears as if it is from providence. It's a little unclear in the writing what or who Pisa is in the opening of it, I know you have that picture posted but it is a good idea to set that out in the essay itself to clarify the subject. estory
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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I have not mention that the story is about a cat intentionally, so the reader can discover that Cats can be angels too:) Thank you so much for your awesome review.
Comment from Spitfire
What a beautiful cat. And the boys too. Amazing that she loved to travel. Did you put her in a carrier? My beloved Japanese Bobtail, Mooshie, passed away from jaw cancer. Actually, we had her put to sleep or she would have died from starvation. We buried her in a cardboard box in our back yard. She came to me too during sleep one night. I reached out and petted her soft white fur. It all felt so real. When I tried to open my eyes to see her, she backed off, letting me know that wasn't allowed. My glimpse of Heaven, I guess. I love your spin on this.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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What a beautiful cat. And the boys too. Amazing that she loved to travel. Did you put her in a carrier? My beloved Japanese Bobtail, Mooshie, passed away from jaw cancer. Actually, we had her put to sleep or she would have died from starvation. We buried her in a cardboard box in our back yard. She came to me too during sleep one night. I reached out and petted her soft white fur. It all felt so real. When I tried to open my eyes to see her, she backed off, letting me know that wasn't allowed. My glimpse of Heaven, I guess. I love your spin on this.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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She didn't like the pet carrier so I was holding her in my arms. She loved to watch over the window.So sorry about your furry friend, from the description your baby had the same color as my Benji, who died of old age and me and my sister, we buried him in our backyard. Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from tfawcus
It's always a great sadness when one loses a much-loved pet. How glad I am that you still have your boys Leo and Dinu to keep you company and bring you joy.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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It's always a great sadness when one loses a much-loved pet. How glad I am that you still have your boys Leo and Dinu to keep you company and bring you joy.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the lovely story about Pisa the cat who went to Heaven and in your dreams she foretells and has shown in your dreams the glimpses of Heaven; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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This speaks the lovely story about Pisa the cat who went to Heaven and in your dreams she foretells and has shown in your dreams the glimpses of Heaven; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thank you so much for this beautiful review.
