Pandella.
Poor Little Clown...3 total reviews
Comment from TheMissRed
Although clowns creep me out, I enjoyed this story and the way you told it. It flowed well, and your ideas connected from the beginning to the end. I also liked the use of capitalization. It isn't something seen in this type of writing, but it worked.
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Although clowns creep me out, I enjoyed this story and the way you told it. It flowed well, and your ideas connected from the beginning to the end. I also liked the use of capitalization. It isn't something seen in this type of writing, but it worked.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Pandella was a poor little clown, she had never laughed, other kids saw her and cried her Pandemic; but she was harmless, one can get a loving hug from her; difference between pandemic and Pandella clarified; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
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Pandella was a poor little clown, she had never laughed, other kids saw her and cried her Pandemic; but she was harmless, one can get a loving hug from her; difference between pandemic and Pandella clarified; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-May-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
This made me sad for the little clown. I think it would teach children to be compassionate towards everyone. I like the use of the words Pandella and Pandemic because a child would get them mixed up. This is very well written. I enjoyed the story. -January L.
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This made me sad for the little clown. I think it would teach children to be compassionate towards everyone. I like the use of the words Pandella and Pandemic because a child would get them mixed up. This is very well written. I enjoyed the story. -January L.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
