Better Late Than Never
Run rabbit, run!11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Better Late Than Never, is a song of triumph over a life of punished devotion. Seeking more one can crawl out from under and see a better future. Nice.
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This poem, Better Late Than Never, is a song of triumph over a life of punished devotion. Seeking more one can crawl out from under and see a better future. Nice.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a love turned sour because of domestic abuse and I liked the metaphor of a rabbit running away in your picture. The only way to stop this is to leave, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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This sounds like a love turned sour because of domestic abuse and I liked the metaphor of a rabbit running away in your picture. The only way to stop this is to leave, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-May-2020
Comment from Margaret Bednar
A personal journey poem that expresses a lesson about love and about one's own strength. I like the repeated stanza - it emphasizes the courage to turn around and address the abuser, which I like a lot. This is a nice free-verse(ish) rhyming, "love bites" poem.
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A personal journey poem that expresses a lesson about love and about one's own strength. I like the repeated stanza - it emphasizes the courage to turn around and address the abuser, which I like a lot. This is a nice free-verse(ish) rhyming, "love bites" poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from Irish Rain
Lovely Miss Lisa.
I like how this turns to God,
and love expands.
Abusive relationships suck.
I think most of us have
experienced them, or grew
up seeing them.
So much more to live and
see that's beautiful!
Great entry,
blessings...
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Lovely Miss Lisa.
I like how this turns to God,
and love expands.
Abusive relationships suck.
I think most of us have
experienced them, or grew
up seeing them.
So much more to live and
see that's beautiful!
Great entry,
blessings...
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very good entry for this contest. You must be very honest with yourself to recognize the wrongs you have done. And to admit it to all is courageous. God saved you, you know it and you are thankful. He will not forget you but guide you to know what real love is.
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Very good entry for this contest. You must be very honest with yourself to recognize the wrongs you have done. And to admit it to all is courageous. God saved you, you know it and you are thankful. He will not forget you but guide you to know what real love is.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the
Love Bites writing prompt contest. Wonderful poetic form and presentation. Your well chosen words flow nicely. Well done.
You painted a troubled relationship well.
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Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the
Love Bites writing prompt contest. Wonderful poetic form and presentation. Your well chosen words flow nicely. Well done.
You painted a troubled relationship well.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is an emotional poem that really shows a deep pain at a relationship gone wrong. There is so much said and so much devotion to God as well. I liked this poem very much. Well penned. -January L.
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This is an emotional poem that really shows a deep pain at a relationship gone wrong. There is so much said and so much devotion to God as well. I liked this poem very much. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Better late than never; now you realized essence of love and wish to restore your love bond through sacrifices; now no demanding, no victimization, no trapping, no causing damage; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
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Better late than never; now you realized essence of love and wish to restore your love bond through sacrifices; now no demanding, no victimization, no trapping, no causing damage; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from roof35
As I read, you made me feel. First I was sad and then angry. Finally I rejoiced. You led me along beautifully. To do all this in perfect rhyme, is quite an accomplishment. I hope to read more of your work.
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As I read, you made me feel. First I was sad and then angry. Finally I rejoiced. You led me along beautifully. To do all this in perfect rhyme, is quite an accomplishment. I hope to read more of your work.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think some of your metaphors and descriptions are very creative and original and work well to share your ideas. I like the break in the stanzas with the coloured stanzas providing a question to think about
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I think some of your metaphors and descriptions are very creative and original and work well to share your ideas. I like the break in the stanzas with the coloured stanzas providing a question to think about
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Comment Written 25-May-2020
