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Same goes to you as to me, some say7 total reviews
Comment from CandySoda777
Your story is good, I see why it won it's contest. Although, I do think it was a bit rushed in between, and too long at the beginning. I like the small details you included: the small arguments, the prank, etc. Good job! :)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Your story is good, I see why it won it's contest. Although, I do think it was a bit rushed in between, and too long at the beginning. I like the small details you included: the small arguments, the prank, etc. Good job! :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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thxs so much, I just signed in after a bit of a hiatus, I never knew it won.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
I just love this story, and I heard that some twins are having this strange capacity to take over some of the things that the other one is not even aware it's happening :"They would always know without any words, when the other
was needed, no matter how far apart they lived. They
were born together and they knew somehow, they would die
together. They would never be alone. It was as if they shared
the same soul. Soulmates forever."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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I just love this story, and I heard that some twins are having this strange capacity to take over some of the things that the other one is not even aware it's happening :"They would always know without any words, when the other
was needed, no matter how far apart they lived. They
were born together and they knew somehow, they would die
together. They would never be alone. It was as if they shared
the same soul. Soulmates forever."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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thxs for your awesome review
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent interpreaion of the prompt Twin Soul Soulmate. Not at all what I was expecting, as one usually thinks of the soulmate being love affairs.
I have seen identical twins so close that they speak in harmony, and even invent their own language, that they insist on sharing a bedroom when growing up even when there is the space for them to have a room each. However, I have never seen with my own eyes such transmission of pain from one to the other.
I feel the actual writing could be tightened up a bit, to bring this story into the exceptional category - and the story is so interesting it merits the effort needed.
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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This is an excellent interpreaion of the prompt Twin Soul Soulmate. Not at all what I was expecting, as one usually thinks of the soulmate being love affairs.
I have seen identical twins so close that they speak in harmony, and even invent their own language, that they insist on sharing a bedroom when growing up even when there is the space for them to have a room each. However, I have never seen with my own eyes such transmission of pain from one to the other.
I feel the actual writing could be tightened up a bit, to bring this story into the exceptional category - and the story is so interesting it merits the effort needed.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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thxs for your awesome comments and tip, I'll take another look
Comment from beizanten
a lighthearted and good beginning. I love twin closeness and finishing each other words. Love how you describe the beautiful wedding gown. the ending is good
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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a lighthearted and good beginning. I love twin closeness and finishing each other words. Love how you describe the beautiful wedding gown. the ending is good
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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thxs for your great comments in this review
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
What a lovely story about the sisters Star and Sheila. Real twins, as it sometimes happens, very close and knowing each other inside out. Touching also the kidney transplant. Soulmates, and a good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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What a lovely story about the sisters Star and Sheila. Real twins, as it sometimes happens, very close and knowing each other inside out. Touching also the kidney transplant. Soulmates, and a good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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thxs so much for your review
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welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This promotes a story about twin soul soulmate telling that fortune favours the brave, and one who fights survives; operations were successful, Star and Sheila, they believe they were born together and would die together; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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This promotes a story about twin soul soulmate telling that fortune favours the brave, and one who fights survives; operations were successful, Star and Sheila, they believe they were born together and would die together; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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thxs for your awesome comments.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was a nice story and very straight forward. I liked it, and I have no suggestions to make for it to be better. I think it could maybe use a bit more emotion. That aprt of it gets glossed over a bit.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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This was a nice story and very straight forward. I liked it, and I have no suggestions to make for it to be better. I think it could maybe use a bit more emotion. That aprt of it gets glossed over a bit.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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thxs for tip and review
