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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb (barbara.wilkey) your St. Louis Chapter 27 part 3.
Oh, no I didn't want to read that McKenzie got kidnapped. So us readers will have to wait what is going to take place in your next chapter?
Gert
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Hello Barb (barbara.wilkey) your St. Louis Chapter 27 part 3.
Oh, no I didn't want to read that McKenzie got kidnapped. So us readers will have to wait what is going to take place in your next chapter?
Gert
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Yes, It does get worse, sorry. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Cindy. So in other word I should be prepared. I just don't desire the very worst.
Gert
Comment from Sankey
My goodness! I knew all this was coming. Hoping everything will work out for all concerned. Very dramatic and you conveyed the horror of it all, very well. No spags. Keep it coming.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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My goodness! I knew all this was coming. Hoping everything will work out for all concerned. Very dramatic and you conveyed the horror of it all, very well. No spags. Keep it coming.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from royowen
Oh boy, Logan will blame himself not being there to protect MacKenzie against these nasties. Poor old Edgar's in the wars again, they have done the wrong thing now, I looks like Sidney parks has a lot of help going on. Here, and now, I wonder what Logan will do. Well done Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
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Oh boy, Logan will blame himself not being there to protect MacKenzie against these nasties. Poor old Edgar's in the wars again, they have done the wrong thing now, I looks like Sidney parks has a lot of help going on. Here, and now, I wonder what Logan will do. Well done Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Bless you Barbara
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara. This is a total surprise. It's short but well paced and I loved the writing. But I don't like that Mackenzie have been kidnapped. Where the heck do we go from here? All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Hi Barbara. This is a total surprise. It's short but well paced and I loved the writing. But I don't like that Mackenzie have been kidnapped. Where the heck do we go from here? All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is romance? Hell of a romance! Very well written. Fast paced. Smooth movement of thought and actions throughout. Scene start and end complete. Interesting. Good character development. Clear, concise dialogue. Only one grammatical error noted:
"Why's there blood on him?... (take out the "is" to make it proper)
Thank you for the opportunity to review your fine work.
Carry on!
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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This is romance? Hell of a romance! Very well written. Fast paced. Smooth movement of thought and actions throughout. Scene start and end complete. Interesting. Good character development. Clear, concise dialogue. Only one grammatical error noted:
"Why's there blood on him?... (take out the "is" to make it proper)
Thank you for the opportunity to review your fine work.
Carry on!
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the catch. I had changed that sentence and forgot to take out an extra word. Thank you again.
Comment from tfawcus
An exciting chapter with plenty of action. You've certainly ramped things up here. The writing has a nice sense of urgency. Short sentences, cutting between various characters' POV, etc., keep up the pace.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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An exciting chapter with plenty of action. You've certainly ramped things up here. The writing has a nice sense of urgency. Short sentences, cutting between various characters' POV, etc., keep up the pace.
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Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Shirley McLain
What an adventure that woman has had. You do such a great job, as I tell you every week. I didn't notice any mistakes. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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What an adventure that woman has had. You do such a great job, as I tell you every week. I didn't notice any mistakes. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
This is great. So much excitement going on. Poor Edger has really been through it, but it sounds like he's going to be okay. I can't understand how these men got past security. And four of them! A lot of parties involved. The police department will have a lot to answer for. They're practically useless. Joanie's doing a better job than the police. At least she could give a description of the vehicle and got pictures. judi
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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This is great. So much excitement going on. Poor Edger has really been through it, but it sounds like he's going to be okay. I can't understand how these men got past security. And four of them! A lot of parties involved. The police department will have a lot to answer for. They're practically useless. Joanie's doing a better job than the police. At least she could give a description of the vehicle and got pictures. judi
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. I hope Edger continues to recover. Being shot after he was weak from being sedated is just too much for the poor dog. judi
