Does Heaven exist?
A theory of the Heavens.4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on Heaven in the form of this personal essay. I agree that God will forgive all because of Jesus' work for them. Best wishes in the contest! Thank you for entering!
"We have the right to this own belief." (I would suggest changing the word order to:
We have the right to own this belief.)
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on Heaven in the form of this personal essay. I agree that God will forgive all because of Jesus' work for them. Best wishes in the contest! Thank you for entering!
"We have the right to this own belief." (I would suggest changing the word order to:
We have the right to own this belief.)
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you and you're welcome! I made the suggestion you advised me. Thank you, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from country ranch writer
For anyone concerned I believe what my grandpa used to say that he'll is already being served here on earth and when we die it has to be better than thus. I believe in the afterlife and only those who are so messed up killing folks go to purgatory until God says other wise as they must pay for their sins.animals all go to heaven as they are Gos creatures.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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For anyone concerned I believe what my grandpa used to say that he'll is already being served here on earth and when we die it has to be better than thus. I believe in the afterlife and only those who are so messed up killing folks go to purgatory until God says other wise as they must pay for their sins.animals all go to heaven as they are Gos creatures.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
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Comment from Puzzle
i LOVED this piece!!! Here's my argument. you can't have something from nothing. THere has to be a creator. even if the creator is a force. Or simply energy. I believe heaven is a feeling. If you live your life in the best possible way, you will die feeling complete. Since you never know when you are going to die, you must always be a good person. I feel like this is what Jesus was trying to teach people. This is just my theory. Would i be happy if it is a 4th dimension. heck yes! but hopefully I am young forever in that dimension with absolutely no imperfections to obsess over! lol.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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i LOVED this piece!!! Here's my argument. you can't have something from nothing. THere has to be a creator. even if the creator is a force. Or simply energy. I believe heaven is a feeling. If you live your life in the best possible way, you will die feeling complete. Since you never know when you are going to die, you must always be a good person. I feel like this is what Jesus was trying to teach people. This is just my theory. Would i be happy if it is a 4th dimension. heck yes! but hopefully I am young forever in that dimension with absolutely no imperfections to obsess over! lol.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story! Thanks for the six stars! :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job expressing your thoughts and beliefs for the contest. I enjoyed reading your response to the prompt. You gave good supporting info. I would look at the first paragraph. You used 'up there' two times. I would be more specific and not even say up there. You used it in the next paragraph, too. You make several valid points. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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You did a good job expressing your thoughts and beliefs for the contest. I enjoyed reading your response to the prompt. You gave good supporting info. I would look at the first paragraph. You used 'up there' two times. I would be more specific and not even say up there. You used it in the next paragraph, too. You make several valid points. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
